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01-30-2018, 07:44 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 929
Battle Record: 8-11
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12 @DynamiCz
Think Joes that beatable bullshit egos ill make him eat those Delay one Big "Fuckyou" to this veteran, my hatred for him like Gregory Salcidos Your shots like missed free throws that accuracy off on an everday basis bullets have u missing eyes,nose n ears, clues couldnt put u back together like Guess Who? faces Ur bitch packed ur suitcases, says ur broke, wack in bed, just complete rubbish When im sipping Samsonites shell let me grab those handles like rollaway luggage I'll dot your eye and get that shit published face'll have that new frontpage look If u attempt to run Danielle,Steele to ur dome that'll be hotter then her best selling book Your not a crook in these streets i studies your repertoire You'll never have an Enterprise in ur hood theyll just find ur dead body in the trunk of ur rentacar In the bedroom ur bitch says ur subpar thats why she joins me in Minaj's If u say Baio lets fuck! Its usually ends up with u being subjected to molestation charges |
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02-01-2018, 10:50 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 910
Battle Record: 4-4
Rep Power: 7502715 |
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Young child, my promotion was carrying straps, i keep my Gun Raised, Burial praise..hands together, im taking "Joe Out Of Boston"..02 Celtics Trade// Okay Punchline League was Not Ya Place, In order to be "King" you cant Resemble The Ace, How you focus..when you be having "Problems W/ Amen" like you cant Remember Ya Grace// Solid Ya style they "Pump it Up"..killed him, the "Ransom Note" read ya Flow Nothing,fat wife When my Mood is Muzik, make ya life a "Everyday Struggle" when i push Joe Buttons// Okay Had to Toss The Mag..His Position was off..I had to Prop The Bag, Thought he would "Heal(Heel)Off Back" until they realized i had Joe..Boston Crabbed// Nah Shotgun inside the distance..I learned what "In Reach" Meant,fat wife Grip on the handle..the kickback "Shook My Hands" like a Mutual Agreement// Cool Lets be honest your career is mad fraud, your battle verses are Mad Odd, The disbelief you would write a verse telling somebody he has a Dad Bod// Punch lacked Joe got it V joe |
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02-02-2018, 05:30 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Sep 2017
Posts: 3,986
Battle Record: 11-6
Rep Power: 5633916 |
Think Joes that beatable bullshit egos ill make him eat those
Delay one Big "Fuckyou" to this veteran, my hatred for him like Gregory Salcidos 1st line is hard to read, lacks appropriate commas. Concept and punch overall I wasn’t frelin too much Your shots like missed free throws that accuracy off on an everday basis bullets have u missing eyes,nose n ears, clues couldnt put u back together like Guess Who? faces this was good bro, I love lines like this Ur bitch packed ur suitcases, says ur broke, wack in bed, just complete rubbish When im sipping Samsonites shell let me grab those handles like rollaway luggage nah idk what that is lol I'll dot your eye and get that shit published face'll have that new frontpage look If u attempt to run Danielle,Steele to ur dome that'll be hotter then her best selling book danielle wp forced Man didn’t fit in too good, overall decent punch Your not a crook in these streets i studies your repertoire You'll never have an Enterprise in ur hood theyll just find ur dead body in the trunk of ur rentacar commas!!! Good punch tho In the bedroom ur bitch says ur subpar thats why she joins me in Minaj's If u say Baio lets fuck! Its usually ends up with u being subjected to molestation charges wasnt feeling it Vs Young child, my promotion was carrying straps, i keep my Gun Raised, Burial praise..hands together, im taking "Joe Out Of Boston"..02 Celtics Trade// everything is good about this punch except the ancient concept, wording & execution I’m diggin Punchline League was Not Ya Place, In order to be "King" you cant Resemble The Ace, How you focus..when you be having "Problems W/ Amen" like you cant Remember Ya Grace// alright not bad Ya style they "Pump it Up"..killed him, the "Ransom Note" read ya Flow Nothing, When my Mood is Muzik, make ya life a "Everyday Struggle" when i push Joe Buttons// oh nah that’s played, you living in 2002 my Man straight up lol Had to Toss The Mag..His Position was off..I had to Prop The Bag, Thought he would "Heal(Heel)Off Back" until they realized i had Joe..Boston Crabbed// you don’t have to explain wordplay in a punch with ( ), it hurts you Shotgun inside the distance..I learned what "In Reach" Meant, Grip on the handle..the kickback "Shook My Hands" like a Mutual Agreement// lmao I liked this, fuckin dead ass laughed Lets be honest your career is mad fraud, your battle verses are Mad Odd, The disbelief you would write a verse telling somebody he has a Dad Bod// nah man Shoutout to DynamiCz for posting, this was good first verse here but you gotta definitely freshen up your concepts. Wording and rhyming is all on point for damn sure, only thing hurting you is the old concepts. Guess who, enterprise Vs Mutual agreement Vote JB |
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02-03-2018, 02:38 AM
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Scream
Join Date: Jun 2015
Posts: 3,251
Battle Record: 63-35
Accomplishments - 50 Wins
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Rep Power: 22535868 |
Guess who was fresh to me, a little jumbled
Enterprise - cool hit Dynamic shows signs being out the loop of text battling. Just need better concepts Mutual agreement was better for s&f vote- joe |
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