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05-26-2013, 03:15 PM
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The Clown Prince
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This was a very consistent piece, you kept the flow on point
and you really stuck to your subject matter, you got your word usage correct I'm not a fan of centered pieces though..maybe it's just me... either way this was sick from the beginning to the end to be honest I thought the first part was slick, and the second added some flare to it keep it up man
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