Alvin Karpis vs. Profit - ALVIN KARPIS WINS

For Battling · 01-26-2018, 04:17 PM

Profit huh? uh I should just stop you there....
Prada biggest fraud, he can’t even afford a pair of socks from there
barely decent, just a simple nameplay
I’ll call zelph to spray ya block and air, go to war with the heat
Or do it myself, watch my wrist as I leave Fitbits all over the street
now this is nice
Do it for free, catch you where ya mama stay & snipe ya face
I’ll heat ya whole room up for cheap like that amish fireplace
fire again
You been in the closet for years but there’s a slight chance
That you finally come Outfit, in your pink skirt with tight pants
same as the opener here man
You’re a lame with ya text, I’m blazin ya best
There’s no Waco signing you is fresh even if you knew David Koresh
wording in the second line is off, had potential but this is decent

I’m literally calling those simple wordplay nameplays decent at best because I refuse to be bias since I’m not too into wps, if it works then it works. And yours work but they are very simplistic. Fitbits and fireplace were both dope though

Vs

U went to town on FB's mouth, caught an L then pitched a fit
U remind me of idiots wettin the blunt up, the way u OD'd on niggas lips
shoulda say nigga lips instead of niggas, yes it makes all the difference bro. The concept is cool and had potential for dopeness but turned out just “ok”
How TF u HOF here? When no1 feels the BS u write
From both directions u been took off the dribble... dooog u gettin beat left & right
kinda corny & basic here bro
But GOW showed luv, so u praise him like a bitch
As a child u was taught to worship God, That didnt mean ride his DICK
alright cool
Faggot u ain't killin nuttin, w/o Sho I doubt this clowns heard of
So if ur ever compared to a hit man.. s'cos ya career ain't shit w/o Murda
alright not bad
U think rappin bout toast is foolish, just wait till I blast what I'm totin, stupid
All we'll see is this Kidd gone from the bucks.. & it gon mean a coach gets booted
LOVED the set up, wording in the second line a bit off but nonetheless this was a good line

Pretty cool battle. Alvin had 2 hitters that were both LOTB but everything else was mostly filler. The only thing I didn’t like from profit was left & right. Everything else was pretty good and definitely had the most consistent verse here. Could go either way, really depends on voter preference imo. Going with profit.

Vote Profit

01-26-2018, 04:17 PM	#1
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633916	Profit huh? uh I should just stop you there.... Prada biggest fraud, he can’t even afford a pair of socks from there barely decent, just a simple nameplay I’ll call zelph to spray ya block and air, go to war with the heat Or do it myself, watch my wrist as I leave Fitbits all over the street now this is nice Do it for free, catch you where ya mama stay & snipe ya face I’ll heat ya whole room up for cheap like that amish fireplace fire again You been in the closet for years but there’s a slight chance That you finally come Outfit, in your pink skirt with tight pants same as the opener here man You’re a lame with ya text, I’m blazin ya best There’s no Waco signing you is fresh even if you knew David Koresh wording in the second line is off, had potential but this is decent I’m literally calling those simple wordplay nameplays decent at best because I refuse to be bias since I’m not too into wps, if it works then it works. And yours work but they are very simplistic. Fitbits and fireplace were both dope though Vs U went to town on FB's mouth, caught an L then pitched a fit U remind me of idiots wettin the blunt up, the way u OD'd on niggas lips shoulda say nigga lips instead of niggas, yes it makes all the difference bro. The concept is cool and had potential for dopeness but turned out just “ok” How TF u HOF here? When no1 feels the BS u write From both directions u been took off the dribble... dooog u gettin beat left & right kinda corny & basic here bro But GOW showed luv, so u praise him like a bitch As a child u was taught to worship God, That didnt mean ride his DICK alright cool Faggot u ain't killin nuttin, w/o Sho I doubt this clowns heard of So if ur ever compared to a hit man.. s'cos ya career ain't shit w/o Murda alright not bad U think rappin bout toast is foolish, just wait till I blast what I'm totin, stupid All we'll see is this Kidd gone from the bucks.. & it gon mean a coach gets booted LOVED the set up, wording in the second line a bit off but nonetheless this was a good line Pretty cool battle. Alvin had 2 hitters that were both LOTB but everything else was mostly filler. The only thing I didn’t like from profit was left & right. Everything else was pretty good and definitely had the most consistent verse here. Could go either way, really depends on voter preference imo. Going with profit. Vote Profit