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01-25-2018, 07:11 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2016
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Battle Record: 9-5
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pretty one sided tbh
Opener was done well, second needed trimming on the setup its not like it added much but okay punch, if you tidied up the alter ego's bar it would of been pretty good, still okay. Dark well yeh you need to put some thought into what your doing, your writing like its a basic open mic. You need to have more than just rhyming bud. vote classic |
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