Getting the laptop back tonight!

[Finnydot]

Originally Posted by uh-oh

throwaway gawd get the same critique as the other one. the filtering of the sample or the quality of the sample seems too thin. not as thin as the first one tho. i dig it other than that though.

southern drawal is a banger.

years go by is a little hectic, kind of feels like something i would use for a hook section, if that makes sense, like im waiting on it to go into a verse pattern that isn't as busy with the guitars

oh baby needs another kick then the 808, something to occupy the lowmid range. even if you just follow the same 808 pattern, just layer a punchy kick on it, because it feels a little empty

southern drawal is the best of the bunch. so me trying to find shit to critique would be the south adlib hey things, i never liked those but they serve the purpose they were made for in driving the vibe. the bass is filthy. if you could figure out one little spaz pattern with it, it could help. like keep it the same but expand on it. like every 4th or 8th time extend it a couple notes. du-du-du-doo-doo, is how it is now but just put a couple more doo doos on it lol or something. but again i'm looking for shit to critique on it its solid

Southern is an original too. I literally stole the drum pattern from 0-100 trying to break down and understand trap beats better. I've got a song idea ready to go on that one.

I'm literally just getting back the mojo tho.