WRATH vs Ender - Wrath Wins

Pinot Grij · 01-11-2018, 06:45 PM

WRATH -- verse is aight. a little broken wording here and there. the aggression is solid but wording draws back a bit. Some of the wp was decent: electrician, lip bars were cool. Nothing that grabbed me and said this was lotb, opponent really needs to come hard.

Ender -- good aggression. some basic wp that for me hit a bit harder than Wrath. liked the silent line, bottom of the barrel had funny execution. Flavourless roast was lmao. I don't know what that flaw shit means, or the closer.

Look, let's get honest -- these aren't championship-quality verses. So I'm voting on personal preference. I thought Ender had a few more comedic takes that made his verse a better read. I'm voting for Ender.

01-11-2018, 06:45 PM	#6
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	WRATH -- verse is aight. a little broken wording here and there. the aggression is solid but wording draws back a bit. Some of the wp was decent: electrician, lip bars were cool. Nothing that grabbed me and said this was lotb, opponent really needs to come hard. Ender -- good aggression. some basic wp that for me hit a bit harder than Wrath. liked the silent line, bottom of the barrel had funny execution. Flavourless roast was lmao. I don't know what that flaw shit means, or the closer. Look, let's get honest -- these aren't championship-quality verses. So I'm voting on personal preference. I thought Ender had a few more comedic takes that made his verse a better read. I'm voting for Ender. __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.