Week IV: Diablo vs Asylum[DIABLO WINS]

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Asylum: Cool and short piece but I have no idea what your topic were. Because of this it's very hard to really feed anything. The flow was decent, a bit choppy at times but not a big issue at all. Some cool lines here and there. Can't say more than that without having more to go off of, like the topic you chose or something.

Diablo: Dope pic and the first 4 lines dives you straight into it. You write very vivid sci-fi piece in great detail, the flow flows off the tongue as you go and the story just comes along with it beautifully. The story is filled with rather dark light-hearted humor taking stabs at society today with depth and colorful characters. Your piece definitely fulfill the purpose of both of those pics you chose and I smiled at the closure. Solid fucking piece.

Vote: Diablo.