For Battling vs Innovator - FB WINS

[Saint]

Originally Posted by For Battling

@Innovator

One call & the whole squad pull up. Stop testing my shooters
You’ll see the whole building surrounded by choppers, that’s Wednesday’s at Hooters

Guess you mean chopper bikes, not sure or its a local thing....but i see where you're going w it ; wording is rushed, but ok line.

I’ll blast u & ur baby. Trust me I’m a rude thug
The Nina’s cute n she’s crazy.. she’ll leave hearts in the air like cartoon love

People were fuccin w this line but on closer inspection I see its kind of easy but cool ides, would hit harder w a more streamlined setup.

It’s Xmas at Inno’s House. His kids’ hearts filled with joy & with glee!
“Santa?” No jit, it’s Z! Then their faces lit up as soon as I opened up the toys by the tree

Cool. Only minor quib is why r u opening their toys?lol I liked the unique angle here, execution a bit sloppy.

Took your girl to Paris, even told my bros they could join
Had da hoe screamin “ahh, wee wee!” as I showed her the Eiffel Tower w/ my boy

Eh. Eiffel tower - cant give it to u as flipped.

I’ll be on ur balcony posted, prone position on the top floor
Then I let them automatics open up as soon as u get close like garage doors

Ok....this decent hit here.

Ur girls a hustla. She nvr let’s me get the whole thing wen I thump
Said she’d only let me hit that Premium Spotify paid about 10 bucks a month

Spotify i seen done....Nice try though but toi familiar to me.

Fuck this clown we don’t understand you you need more attitude
Cuz the funny thing is you honestly believe niggas is laughing with you and not at you.
Statements. But keen observation.

Watch me pull the pound, leaving dead weight on the ground that’s a hint
Cuz when I spark the fifth, ull be 6 ft deeper than the shadow on ur upper lip.

Coo imagery, clunky setup

And yah bitch? I call her sunflower she always spitting seeds out her 2 lips, geez
So when she say she picked up a few things she ain’t talking bout groceries

Nah

I got yah old girl choking on the gun, that bitch is always ready to blow
So when I say I pulled the rubber grip, that’s just me barebacking the hoe

Its cute. Havent seen it.

Fuck holding peace, wild out on yah whole squad, including yah seed and yah baby moms
And yo take it up with god for that face, cuz it’s clear when he added your lips he was playing the odds

Too wordy here.


Inno- improved from last week, hope u take thé crit & keep on

V- FB