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10-06-2017, 12:35 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2013
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YDK's verse was a cool read -- you gave some life to a pretty well-worn topic.. the line about "rap labels adoring me" was cool.. I really appreciate those personal touches much more these days. I thought it was well-written. Only critique is that the topic is simplistic.
Lars really killed this topic -- it was funny and original. Thoroughly entertained throughout. I tip this match to Lars based mainly on creativity and then execution. Vote -- Lars
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