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[Natural]

I'ma give my honest opinion. No hate intended.

I'm with the group of people who cannot understand it. I have bouts where i think i might then thats quickly erased by its unorthodox nature.

Some of the rhymes are on point and some are not(or at least from my perception).
Your either of high intelligence or want to give off that vibe.
Either we're stupid or your a genius. Because i consider myself pretty intelligent and cannot follow this.
It's everywhere. Like scattered thoughts.

I would like to see you do a piece oriented around a clear topic and perfect rhymes with slants here and there. Something that showcases flow and intellect without going over the readers head. Then i may be able to provide better feed.

As of now i can only say you very unorthodox.

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[Split]

thanks for feed man, I'll hit one of your drops soon

im not trying to make myself look smart and i dont consider myself particularly smart

im just trying to get away from this idea in writing that you gotta build something for it to be great writing. and that the microscope of rhymes can't have a cloudy lens

some of the best, most beautiful things in life are misunderstood or halfway there

so I guess you're not supposed to understand. But you can still take meaning from it


Idk maybe I'm fighting a lost cause lol im addicted to writing like this tho


Last time I bump sry

[Void]

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