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Geno · 08-03-2017, 10:15 AM

Ok..
Dont worry about me is just as wierd
But executive suite was much better. You actually caught a flow and was able to do aomething with it. Theres hope yet. The beats are dope man. U make those?

Heres a big thing. You need to find more umph in your words dog. You sound like your concerned about what people might think on these tracks. You gotta spit like you do t give a fuxk what they think cause you gotta "know" your dope man. Its a certain swag that an emcee has to find to be a convincing artist. Im not convinces atm. But iim routing for you man. Keep working. Eapecially if those r your beats. Thise were the dopest thing ive heard about the tracks so far.
Stay positive man. 1 out of 3 aint the worat ive seen.. At least youve shown me that you can ride a beat when you rly want to. That alone will make me listen to more later. Plus the beats

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08-03-2017, 10:15 AM	#6
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Ok.. Dont worry about me is just as wierd But executive suite was much better. You actually caught a flow and was able to do aomething with it. Theres hope yet. The beats are dope man. U make those? Heres a big thing. You need to find more umph in your words dog. You sound like your concerned about what people might think on these tracks. You gotta spit like you do t give a fuxk what they think cause you gotta "know" your dope man. Its a certain swag that an emcee has to find to be a convincing artist. Im not convinces atm. But iim routing for you man. Keep working. Eapecially if those r your beats. Thise were the dopest thing ive heard about the tracks so far. Stay positive man. 1 out of 3 aint the worat ive seen.. At least youve shown me that you can ride a beat when you rly want to. That alone will make me listen to more later. Plus the beats 1 __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*