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05-22-2013, 06:59 AM
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143 is here....
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*Going to the Police for a restraining order*
This is vivid as fuck. the flow and the structure greatly highlights the build up in this. At the end you make it as plain as white bread to summate your drop. This drop is as abstract in places as it is in your face. Hard to pull that off as a writer but you did it...Nice
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