vanished

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I remember your writtens always having this strong aesthetic appeal for me. Strong, sensuous mood derived from deliberate diction. This probably reads cluttered to anyone with out flow. In moments when you do compromise on the perfect bar flow, its still led along by by the words.
This moved along in a somewhat open endend way, with lines like

such a synergistic release comes from, this basket of malice
ill have it to here - 22oz black coffee french press.

steel razor tandem. Dear, anybody, anywhere who has ears
in a position to translate. this ballad i have here

working as little transitioning points in advancing and redirecting the meaning. I dont like to stand back and look at your writtens though, i appreciate them better reading from line to line because they read like freestyles or something.
I had to Google like 4 words though and im pissed 4/10