King, Warrior, Magician, Lover

veritas · 06-29-2017, 10:13 AM

Yelling "kinninigan" at the wake of Finnegan,
google the reference to prove you're a simpleton.
Magician: Expose the conditioning of lies you're living in,
and thus testifies your excuses are useless for giving in.
Dick her down sure, but get her wet first from listening
praise and compliment her amazing opulence, riveting.
Lover: She ejaculates first, let the nookie wookie win,
sanctify the spiritual marriage, never live in sin.
to battle V is you thinking illogically and broken,
spit flames to leave your skin black, Token.
Warrior: Fear transmuted to courage against any foes opposing,
the right hand of righteous justice, and every enemy knowing.
Rule with Wisdom, never schmooze with fools never growing.
Chess not checkers, so every one of my lectures is a clever showing
The King: Bring the template of maturity through smoothly flowing.

big baby · 06-29-2017, 12:56 PM

sun thx

big baby · 06-29-2017, 12:56 PM

sub

big baby · 06-29-2017, 12:57 PM

suck thx

Eŋg · 06-29-2017, 04:04 PM

i exited this thread after understanding the first reference without googling it.

soz.

veritas · 06-29-2017, 08:36 PM

prove you understand it:

Eŋg · 06-29-2017, 10:04 PM

i won't pretend to have read the hermetica, or have had the patience to sit through joyce's attempt to split the etym - but i'm familiar enough with each to see what you were trying to do.

should i read the rest yet?

veritas · 06-29-2017, 10:12 PM

No.

Tha Pastor Reach Yeah · 07-01-2017, 08:50 AM

I kinda feel that your opening bar was like a challenge that you threw down to whoever reads this. Like, "Are you smart enough to understand this verse? I don't think so!" which is a pretty bold move really to make at the beginning of your verse. The whole verse really was a lifting up of yourself while putting others down quite condescendingly, which fits in with your on-line persona at the moment.

Most of the verse was a fairly standard flex, but I thought your opening was very provocative so I think you pulled that off well.

veritas · 07-01-2017, 10:32 AM

Thanks pastor. Your synopsis is accurate.

big baby · 07-01-2017, 10:40 AM

i think it was really bad, in terms of someone doing this for awhile. if my friend (i have no friends)who did it for a few months wrote this it would be dope. But seeing as you've done for this awhile, even sporadically over the course of a few years, i see nothing really cool or stuff. kinda sucked thx.

veritas · 07-01-2017, 10:48 AM

Ok fair enough. Thank you. I will do better.

NYCSPITZ · 07-01-2017, 04:06 PM

This is a good book I am currently on the King section. Best psychology book I've probably ever read and I'm not even halfway done. Everybody on this site primarily exhibits the child archetypes, you can see how there are 32 year old heros/high chair tyrants all over the place here. It's sad to see.

Tha Pastor Reach Yeah · 07-01-2017, 04:10 PM

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Originally Posted by NYCSPITZ

This is a good book I am currently on the King section. Best psychology book I've probably ever read and I'm not even halfway done. Everybody on this site primarily exhibits the child archetypes, you can see how there are 32 year old heros/high chair tyrants all over the place here. It's sad to see.

Everybody?

NYCSPITZ · 07-01-2017, 04:11 PM

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Originally Posted by Tha Pastor Reach Yeah

Everybody?

Yeah maybe that's a reach but like attracts like I'd say 92%

NYCSPITZ · 07-01-2017, 04:23 PM

Predominant Archetypes exhibited by veritas line by line:

Yelling "kinninigan" at the wake of Finnegan,
google the reference to prove you're a simpleton.
The Know-It-All-Trickster
Magician: Expose the conditioning of lies you're living in,
and thus testifies your excuses are useless for giving in.
Too glib for Trickster; This is The Dummy
Dick her down sure, but get her wet first from listening
praise and compliment her amazing opulence, riveting.
The Mama's Boy
Lover: She ejaculates first, let the nookie wookie win,
sanctify the spiritual marriage, never live in sin.
The addicted Lover
to battle V is you thinking illogically and broken,
spit flames to leave your skin black, Token.
The coward
Warrior: Fear transmuted to courage against any foes opposing,
the right hand of righteous justice, and every enemy knowing.\
The hero
Rule with Wisdom, never schmooze with fools never growing.
Chess not checkers, so every one of my lectures is a clever showing
The King: Bring the template of maturity through smoothly flowing.
The weakling prince

Here we see ONE mature archetype (lover) and at that it is exhibited in an undeveloped form. The psyche exhibited by this poem is clearly at the hero stage. You are close, Keep it up.

Tha Pastor Reach Yeah · 07-01-2017, 04:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NYCSPITZ

Predominant Archetypes exhibited by veritas line by line:

Yelling "kinninigan" at the wake of Finnegan,
google the reference to prove you're a simpleton.
The Know-It-All-Trickster
Magician: Expose the conditioning of lies you're living in,
and thus testifies your excuses are useless for giving in.
Too glib for Trickster; This is The Dummy
Dick her down sure, but get her wet first from listening
praise and compliment her amazing opulence, riveting.
The Mama's Boy
Lover: She ejaculates first, let the nookie wookie win,
sanctify the spiritual marriage, never live in sin.
The addicted Lover
to battle V is you thinking illogically and broken,
spit flames to leave your skin black, Token.
The coward
Warrior: Fear transmuted to courage against any foes opposing,
the right hand of righteous justice, and every enemy knowing.\
The hero
Rule with Wisdom, never schmooze with fools never growing.
Chess not checkers, so every one of my lectures is a clever showing
The King: Bring the template of maturity through smoothly flowing.
The weakling prince

Here we see ONE mature archetype (lover) and at that it is exhibited in an undeveloped form. The psyche exhibited by this poem is clearly at the hero stage. You are close, Keep it up.

Lol that's dope. I don't fully understand it but that's a truly masterful breakdown

veritas · 07-01-2017, 05:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NYCSPITZ

Predominant Archetypes exhibited by veritas line by line:

Yelling "kinninigan" at the wake of Finnegan,
google the reference to prove you're a simpleton.
The Know-It-All-Trickster
Magician: Expose the conditioning of lies you're living in,
and thus testifies your excuses are useless for giving in.
Too glib for Trickster; This is The Dummy
Dick her down sure, but get her wet first from listening
praise and compliment her amazing opulence, riveting.
The Mama's Boy
Lover: She ejaculates first, let the nookie wookie win,
sanctify the spiritual marriage, never live in sin.
The addicted Lover
to battle V is you thinking illogically and broken,
spit flames to leave your skin black, Token.
The coward
Warrior: Fear transmuted to courage against any foes opposing,
the right hand of righteous justice, and every enemy knowing.\
The hero
Rule with Wisdom, never schmooze with fools never growing.
Chess not checkers, so every one of my lectures is a clever showing
The King: Bring the template of maturity through smoothly flowing.
The weakling prince

Here we see ONE mature archetype (lover) and at that it is exhibited in an undeveloped form. The psyche exhibited by this poem is clearly at the hero stage. You are close, Keep it up.

You got me bent sideways here and you know it. Or you don't understand the book. But I salute the effort. Well done.

I am sure you understand that this entire site acts to foster the immaturity yes? And that I act as the shaman to help those here break that immaturity?

Why else would I make this topic if I was just going to act in the immaturity realm? Lol....your response was an immature troll and shows that you still feel the need to prove yourself to me. By both lessening me and upping yourself?

This is so meta.

NYCSPITZ · 07-01-2017, 05:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by veritas

You got me bent sideways here and you know it. Or you don't understand the book. But I salute the effort. Well done.

I am sure you understand that this entire site acts to foster the immaturity yes? And that I act as the shaman to help those here break that immaturity?

Why else would I make this topic if I was just going to act in the immaturity realm? Lol....your response was an immature troll and shows that you still feel the need to prove yourself to me. By both lessening me and upping yourself?

This is so meta.

Actually I retract coward and replace it with grandstander bully. IMO.

veritas · 07-01-2017, 06:00 PM

Bro.......lets talk about this. This is how it has been for years with you and me. You can't just read half a book then apply the wrong classifications and say that this piece is immature when the exact thing you did was.

What i did here was give traits of each in their fullness. This is confidence not cockiness.

Would you like to call me and discuss your constant attempts to belittle me while simultanely always trying to bolster my respect towards your intellectual supremacy sir?

07-01-2017, 04:06 PM	#13
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	This is a good book I am currently on the King section. Best psychology book I've probably ever read and I'm not even halfway done. Everybody on this site primarily exhibits the child archetypes, you can see how there are 32 year old heros/high chair tyrants all over the place here. It's sad to see. __________________ UNIFIED THEORY

07-01-2017, 04:23 PM	#16
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	Predominant Archetypes exhibited by veritas line by line: Yelling "kinninigan" at the wake of Finnegan, google the reference to prove you're a simpleton. The Know-It-All-Trickster Magician: Expose the conditioning of lies you're living in, and thus testifies your excuses are useless for giving in. Too glib for Trickster; This is The Dummy Dick her down sure, but get her wet first from listening praise and compliment her amazing opulence, riveting. The Mama's Boy Lover: She ejaculates first, let the nookie wookie win, sanctify the spiritual marriage, never live in sin. The addicted Lover to battle V is you thinking illogically and broken, spit flames to leave your skin black, Token. The coward Warrior: Fear transmuted to courage against any foes opposing, the right hand of righteous justice, and every enemy knowing.\ The hero Rule with Wisdom, never schmooze with fools never growing. Chess not checkers, so every one of my lectures is a clever showing The King: Bring the template of maturity through smoothly flowing. The weakling prince Here we see ONE mature archetype (lover) and at that it is exhibited in an undeveloped form. The psyche exhibited by this poem is clearly at the hero stage. You are close, Keep it up. __________________ UNIFIED THEORY Last edited by NYCSPITZ; 07-01-2017 at 04:25 PM.

06-29-2017, 04:04 PM	#5
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,150 Rep Power: 0	i exited this thread after understanding the first reference without googling it. soz.

06-29-2017, 10:04 PM	#7
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,150 Rep Power: 0	i won't pretend to have read the hermetica, or have had the patience to sit through joyce's attempt to split the etym - but i'm familiar enough with each to see what you were trying to do. should i read the rest yet?

07-01-2017, 08:50 AM	#9
Tha Pastor Reach Yeah Allan o dywyllwch Join Date: Jul 2016 Posts: 163 Battle Record: 10-0 Champed - AOWL Season 7 - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 514460	I kinda feel that your opening bar was like a challenge that you threw down to whoever reads this. Like, "Are you smart enough to understand this verse? I don't think so!" which is a pretty bold move really to make at the beginning of your verse. The whole verse really was a lifting up of yourself while putting others down quite condescendingly, which fits in with your on-line persona at the moment. Most of the verse was a fairly standard flex, but I thought your opening was very provocative so I think you pulled that off well.