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01-08-2017, 06:31 PM
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MVGT Max
I liked both verses, but imo Max edged it with mechanics and structure. Sammy had a more thought-provoking take on the subject, but the messy presentation and rhyming took away from the overall read as a poetic piece. Max's roads were borderline redundant in the way each stanza started, but I like the content that followed and how each road boasted different characteristics. Great job.
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