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Old 01-08-2017, 05:16 PM   #1
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dope match fellas.. i enjoyed both pieces
Asylum - a very captivating intro which drew me in from the jump, loving the imagery and progression.. i ain't really got any issues with this verse, also ur last 6 lines were dope, closing the piece nicely. well done

Nigma - solid flow man, a once good man who became a cold hearted and lustful ruler, sharing his tyranny with men of his ilk.. i think u meant horniness in the 11th line tho, apart from that typo i also have no issues with ur verse, some profound nuggets littered around here and there, nice.

both stayed on topic and i really loved the pieces, close in my eyes but i got Nigma edging this by a lil margin
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