Week 3: Jesodist vs. Coup [COUP 5-0]

Insanevillain · 01-07-2017, 11:14 PM

Vote Coup....

Jess - I/ve used peoples names in stories before, but this was just... iono... a whole lot of shit to diss coup... It was funny in parts but the story wasnt very engaging... just a list of things to do to someone..

Coup wrote a politically deeply poetic piece... that was deep... and had better flow and imagery...

Ipreferred coups piece also because it was complete... even though it was shorter... Jess... instead of a list... i think you shoulda told was what actually happened to coup... instead of telling us the things that could or should happen to coup

01-07-2017, 11:14 PM	#6
Insanevillain Member Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 44 Rep Power: 0	Vote Coup.... Jess - I/ve used peoples names in stories before, but this was just... iono... a whole lot of shit to diss coup... It was funny in parts but the story wasnt very engaging... just a list of things to do to someone.. Coup wrote a politically deeply poetic piece... that was deep... and had better flow and imagery... Ipreferred coups piece also because it was complete... even though it was shorter... Jess... instead of a list... i think you shoulda told was what actually happened to coup... instead of telling us the things that could or should happen to coup