Untold vs Flo Real {Untold wins}

Undead. · 05-21-2013, 10:16 AM

UN

Flo's equilibrium's off. He's an unstable, un confident kid
Only New Balance u'll find.. Is the one I leave in ya ass from stompin it in

Not a hard hit. but creative.

Ya chompin on men. This fags in a mag for cum
When Flo's like "Brochure".. He's answerin a gay sex ad in the back of one

Creative nice WP. This was cool & LOL

Ya neva grind on the street or supplyin the heat. Ur the scaredest coward
but if ya hustle n flo, ur a cracked out white bitch bein pimped by Terrance Howard

forced ur multi. could've made this hit harder. Worded it differently. good angle just wish the execution matched.

ur in a humble career mate, fastfood is ya clear fate
u'll make Sonic boom, n be employee of the month at the drive thru a year strait

meh

when it comes to chicks, u prefer suckin dicks. i'll be honest n say
That if a bitch look into Realize, she'll do that n be aware ya obviously gay

LOL smooth WP. this was cool.

vs.

FLO

The trash you've come out with recently cunt, couldn't be shitter
Seriously his lines are so bad, its no surprise this runt gets rejected by litter

Forced."couldn't be shittier" not shitter, there bud. Ur set up doesn't correlate canine/runt of the litter.. good idea but poorly executed

I poked your bitch so deep I left that bitch on the floor out cold
He tried playin poke-her an leaves her disappointed when it ends quick and un-folds

Cool NF. this one was ur best line imo.

I beat whoever I face wherever it is, I'm known as a safe bet bitch
you’ll sever n bleed, Cus however i end and whenever I leave, I'll leave un-bested

Ehh..not a fan the un flips are getting old...fast. i liked the other one better tbh. this one was ok

a picture speaks a thousand words, while yours seems adamant not to talk
to be honest i wouldn’t show my face off either if it looked like it had caught fire and been put out with forks

tooo long winded bud, not effect for me. and doesnt rhyme..

Didnt just fuck your mrs I bounced up and down on the bitch in the literal sense
Daayyme.... she looked like she was poured into them clothes..... and then forgot to say when

"I didnt" u meant to say? i dislike how you word things. It comes off as forced. This is to indirect for my taste. Ur not battling his "mrs." ur battling untold..its cool to ref it but keep the actual punch on ur opponent

V/ Untold

he was more direct. better attempts..smoother wordplay & better flow. Just the better verse. Flo u need to cut ur wordin down & word ur bars better entirely. U have lotto smirkish type quips. To wordy. all in all good battle guys.

05-21-2013, 10:16 AM	#8
Undead. Coolest Story Ever Bro.. Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 166 Battle Record: 2-4 Rep Power: 38	UN Flo's equilibrium's off. He's an unstable, un confident kid Only New Balance u'll find.. Is the one I leave in ya ass from stompin it in Not a hard hit. but creative. Ya chompin on men. This fags in a mag for cum When Flo's like "Brochure".. He's answerin a gay sex ad in the back of one Creative nice WP. This was cool & LOL Ya neva grind on the street or supplyin the heat. Ur the scaredest coward but if ya hustle n flo, ur a cracked out white bitch bein pimped by Terrance Howard forced ur multi. could've made this hit harder. Worded it differently. good angle just wish the execution matched. ur in a humble career mate, fastfood is ya clear fate u'll make Sonic boom, n be employee of the month at the drive thru a year strait meh when it comes to chicks, u prefer suckin dicks. i'll be honest n say That if a bitch look into Realize, she'll do that n be aware ya obviously gay LOL smooth WP. this was cool. vs. FLO The trash you've come out with recently cunt, couldn't be shitter Seriously his lines are so bad, its no surprise this runt gets rejected by litter Forced."couldn't be shittier" not shitter, there bud. Ur set up doesn't correlate canine/runt of the litter.. good idea but poorly executed I poked your bitch so deep I left that bitch on the floor out cold He tried playin poke-her an leaves her disappointed when it ends quick and un-folds Cool NF. this one was ur best line imo. I beat whoever I face wherever it is, I'm known as a safe bet bitch you’ll sever n bleed, Cus however i end and whenever I leave, I'll leave un-bested Ehh..not a fan the un flips are getting old...fast. i liked the other one better tbh. this one was ok a picture speaks a thousand words, while yours seems adamant not to talk to be honest i wouldn’t show my face off either if it looked like it had caught fire and been put out with forks tooo long winded bud, not effect for me. and doesnt rhyme.. Didnt just fuck your mrs I bounced up and down on the bitch in the literal sense Daayyme.... she looked like she was poured into them clothes..... and then forgot to say when "I didnt" u meant to say? i dislike how you word things. It comes off as forced. This is to indirect for my taste. Ur not battling his "mrs." ur battling untold..its cool to ref it but keep the actual punch on ur opponent V/ Untold he was more direct. better attempts..smoother wordplay & better flow. Just the better verse. Flo u need to cut ur wordin down & word ur bars better entirely. U have lotto smirkish type quips. To wordy. all in all good battle guys.