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Join Date: Oct 2001
Posts: 3,228
Champed - NWL Season 2
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MVGT Jesodist
Jesodist - Total domination from an approach standpoint: You bodied the topic more thoroughly. Was not enthralled by Timeless's lackluster flurry opening rhyme scheme... rushing amateurishly into battle... Jesodist, wonderful wordplay. You peaked my interest much more, especially, after concentrating on the topic at hand while differentiating these two pieces... Jesodists presentation, in terms of the aesthetics, capitalization, as well as the angle, mechanics, and overall enjoyability were all superior this week. Quote:
Time will tell if Timeless can rebound from this. Will talk indepth about the battle in the week 2 mag.
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