AOWL Spotlight Match #1: Buddha (7-4) VS. Mike Wrecka (6-5) [MIKE WRECKA WINS, 6-1.]

ThisisDAM · 05-20-2013, 12:46 PM

Zen came nice. I thought the flow was good, but kinda sketchy as certain points but that's nitpicking. The verse does seem to end abruptly tho, I think it could have been stretched out more & perhaps a meatier ending would have birthed. But overall, good take & nice showing. Mike, I didn't particularly enjoy your take but this was a good piece of story telling, great in fact I thought. You went along pretty well with it. Im sorry to cut this short, no pun intended, but I gotta go with Mike on this. I felt it Zen went a bit longer he could have taken it. But, I wasn't fulfilled with his showing.

Vote - Mike

05-20-2013, 12:46 PM	#10
ThisisDAM Significance over Purpose Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: nYc Posts: 141 Battle Record: 3-2 Rep Power: 38	Zen came nice. I thought the flow was good, but kinda sketchy as certain points but that's nitpicking. The verse does seem to end abruptly tho, I think it could have been stretched out more & perhaps a meatier ending would have birthed. But overall, good take & nice showing. Mike, I didn't particularly enjoy your take but this was a good piece of story telling, great in fact I thought. You went along pretty well with it. Im sorry to cut this short, no pun intended, but I gotta go with Mike on this. I felt it Zen went a bit longer he could have taken it. But, I wasn't fulfilled with his showing. Vote - Mike __________________ Twitter - @ThisisDAM