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Prayers won't help.
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: Baltimore, Md
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1) this read smooth. Didn't rly care for it's concept tho. 2) this was a nah. In limbo w.the old jokes unless flipped dope. 3) I did a 'heh' in my head at coke zero. 4) ah jokes. One of your strengths. 5) Didn't work. Came off corny 6) no. 1) nasty wording yeesh. But, wtf is a skunk? 2) this had a lot of potential wording wise. I still liked it a lot tho. 3) meh. 4) cool personal. 5) this could've been soo dope. Syl took away from it. Still ok tho. 6) green to this. But it's self explanatory. Meh.bar. I felt ill-nika verse more. Des came off as a key. Ill came off more polished V- illnika Last edited by Suthaveli; 11-18-2016 at 09:46 AM. |
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