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10-14-2016, 07:24 PM | #1 |
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Battle Arena Tournament - Mr.J vs Destroyer - OPEN FOR VOTES
VERSE 1
Last week you was the hottest out, now you gotta bounce. Ill sock this clown, put the strap to his face & give mankind something to talk about dudes weird & probably thinks he could be the Mobs last boss. hes revered for his whacks, they are literally delivered as hand jobs Im eating Vietnamese, just so ya know...blow me partna if you voting for Trump, I got you & then him, then Ill save Jodie Foster in you bitches like prom night, that nine is giving em frog eyes. usher in that shaft nice & slow, steady triggering your soft side. any slip up could put you in jeopardy, so save me trouble when that beam hit you it isnt going to be the daily double VERSE 2 i leave bitches dead & u are the next to be fuck this dude i don't even know like a sex addict who got slipped ecstasy see him jumped, leave him with bleeding stumps grab this pussy & beat it up, and i'm not even trump i get mad hoes, fuck em and then tell em that it's time to go but Bush was suspended from the today show for u a long time ago des will let him rest in hell...kid will learn his lesson well watch me taran killam like he didn't just get fired from SNL slice him up till u couldn't put him back together with a suture leave those body parts spread out with no bags like netcees foreseeable future |
10-14-2016, 07:43 PM | #2 |
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I got verse two, verse one had the man kind joint that's been done too many times, same goes for whack ugh, soft side was weird didn't like verse one sorry. Verse two was more consistent, dig the opener and ender was funny but yea I know who u are especially when u name you're self Regardless it was the superior verse
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10-17-2016, 11:42 PM | #3 |
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Mankind n daily double.
Opener ...trump bar..SNL Verse two. |
10-18-2016, 10:24 AM | #4 |
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That daily double shit was fuegoo. Second verse had that opener which was dope n a cool closer.
Vote verse 2 |
10-18-2016, 12:16 PM | #5 |
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verse 2 was just more overpowering... and yes the SNL bar was dope
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11-09-2016, 08:53 AM | #6 |
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verse two def had more hits and was more consistent than than verse 1. standouts are
v1- opener and v2 trump |
11-09-2016, 08:54 AM | #7 |
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verse two def had more hits and was more consistent than than verse 1. standouts are
v1- opener and v2 trump. vote v2 |
11-13-2016, 09:23 PM | #8 |
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Vote- Vs two
I felt like bars better |
12-06-2016, 06:47 PM | #9 |
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v/verse 2 - flowed better and hit more consistently, nice flow on the setup for the trump bar too.
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