Self-discovery

[Scripter]

I think it started out good but got a little dry toward the end.
It was indeed a little difficult to follow the topic of what you were saying maybe a little too much metaphor, which may or may not of hurt your piece. If people can't interrupt what you are saying, how can they appreciate it. I guess it depends on your goal. You could be taking the abstract approach(not everyone is gonna get what your saying) or you could be trying to articulate when you speak(you are relating to your experiences or experiences that many people can relate to).