Battle Arena Tournament - Schadenfreude vs Slechtn

Utmost · 10-10-2016, 08:28 PM

Verse 1

I'll place the tool right up his mouthpiece to the point that he can't handle it
Rest my case & put this scrub in a bag ...that's a toothbrush travel kit.

Verse 2

Keyboard Killa, shooting shit online ain’t nothing to brag fag
while I’ll always apply the Pound ‘fore I type a word, that’s a hashtag.
Gun bar? Gun ownership’s not some’n this fraud can claim
get to talking BANG, stick w/ me every step of the way, it’s a walking cane.

nice battle right here, both had some fresh concepts. only thing that really separated them was I felt verse 1 was a touch too wordy at times.
Verse 2 came off real crisp which def made punches hit harder and walking stick was illy.

good battle gents

v/ Verse 2

10-10-2016, 08:28 PM	#1
Utmost Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 322 Battle Record: 13-19 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 4320636	Verse 1 I'll place the tool right up his mouthpiece to the point that he can't handle it Rest my case & put this scrub in a bag ...that's a toothbrush travel kit. Verse 2 Keyboard Killa, shooting shit online ain’t nothing to brag fag while I’ll always apply the Pound ‘fore I type a word, that’s a hashtag. Gun bar? Gun ownership’s not some’n this fraud can claim get to talking BANG, stick w/ me every step of the way, it’s a walking cane. nice battle right here, both had some fresh concepts. only thing that really separated them was I felt verse 1 was a touch too wordy at times. Verse 2 came off real crisp which def made punches hit harder and walking stick was illy. good battle gents v/ Verse 2