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10-06-2016, 09:48 AM
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Kill.It.Nonstop
Join Date: Jun 2014
Posts: 666
Battle Record: 3-3
Rep Power: 662201   |
Ydk... solid flip with the wording of the time/record...well written fa real..
2trip...ginna try an give u some feedback that will help... rhyme scheme ia good finally from you... really ur missing wordplay/creativity. Something needs to go with the word accomplice..a connection either in the set up or the actual insult... best i seen from you so far tho...u gettin it Vote...YdK |
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