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Ur a fat sloppy re re & embarassed ur fam since a pre teen
Ud have ur own mother roll in her grave just to cover it w/ creamcheese Its ur fault shes dead. N that aint a type of disparagement But w/ u for a son as life of her heritage she prolly died of embrassment Ur a faggot fer real....an u ugly as fuck w/ that animal grill So if u have a wet dream i hope it involves a bathtub & a handful of pills Drug dealer? I aint buyin them lies neither u white tweaker Ud see a live heater & bring the fuzz around the metal like pipecleaners Actin like he flip raw, so i gotta pick apart this kids flaws Watch me drag em thru the streets so quick theyd reinvent the rickshaw U overtip a bitch to wait ur table & never bang her a-hole if u ever see that fox n turner out its cuz ur too broke to pay your cable Wen i get a rim job im swappin rari stocks at the bodyshop If u talkin bout a rimjob its prolly followed by swallowing bukake shots Im sick of the lies too, i kno where u gettin ur lines dude When u see this bitter snake bite n bars it aint no whiskey & lime juice U sneak round dead vets archives for lines too often killer This flatfoot goes to tiptoe thru their gravesite like the moonwalk in thriller NBL Top punches, has he ever had a quote? Answer-nope. Cuz every week they cut ur words out the mag like a fuckin ransom note BA pic title? No matter how much u cry u never gon get it. So next time u try to take the beltway i hope u die in a head on collision This pinkslips a headshot now leave ur cellar b4 ur legs rot Next time u in a basement starin at threads'll be in a pakistani sweatshop |
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Well. Bleaks poor wording ruined this verse. Your best line sounded hella suspect. 'You know I kill, I prefer it' ran together while reading and came off gay as shit. I mean yeah I know what you were trying to do, but you didn't. Pink slip could have been better.
Bags verse was whatever. Wet dream was alright the rest was okay. V bags |
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