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09-16-2016, 06:59 PM
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Mad fucking dangerous.
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Cred's line was disjointed. She swallows, so her face is covered? Also, the word "more" was in the wrong spot. Pinot Grij had a perfectly executed topical line where the wordplay workdd both ways despite not being integral to the punch.
Vote: Pinot Grij
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