AOWL WK12: Split (5-4) VS. Adonis (4-3) [ADONIS WINS, 8-0.]

Mike Wrecka · 05-18-2013, 08:40 AM

Adonis - strong verse. that blue text irritated the fuck out of me. thanks for that. but ya this was a verse that I feel got you back on track to where you were earlier in the season. very good stuff here, and the flow was on point. content wise , reminded me of matt damon and ben afflecks characters from the movie Dogma. if you've ever seen it. it worked really well. enjoyed the slightly shorter bars you used here. prolly verse of the week imo

split - fuck you. no seriously fuck you. this was to me, the best verse ive ever read from you. where a lot of the time your flow makes me scratch my head, this piece flowed incredibly well for me. the tone, the words and the mood you created were all awesome. but you didn't write enough. not nearly. waaayy to short and im sure that wasn't intentional. like you just couldn't finish because of real life stuff but ya im kinda pissed that you didn't have the opportunity to fully complete this gem. could have been epic.

still a good battle but ya obvious winner is obvious

vote- adonis

05-18-2013, 08:40 AM	#10
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	Adonis - strong verse. that blue text irritated the fuck out of me. thanks for that. but ya this was a verse that I feel got you back on track to where you were earlier in the season. very good stuff here, and the flow was on point. content wise , reminded me of matt damon and ben afflecks characters from the movie Dogma. if you've ever seen it. it worked really well. enjoyed the slightly shorter bars you used here. prolly verse of the week imo split - fuck you. no seriously fuck you. this was to me, the best verse ive ever read from you. where a lot of the time your flow makes me scratch my head, this piece flowed incredibly well for me. the tone, the words and the mood you created were all awesome. but you didn't write enough. not nearly. waaayy to short and im sure that wasn't intentional. like you just couldn't finish because of real life stuff but ya im kinda pissed that you didn't have the opportunity to fully complete this gem. could have been epic. still a good battle but ya obvious winner is obvious vote- adonis __________________ A.bove T.he R.est