AOWL Spotlight Match #1: Buddha (7-4) VS. Mike Wrecka (6-5) [MIKE WRECKA WINS, 6-1.]

Inno · 05-18-2013, 12:24 AM

mic.

smooth shit like always..felt like your backstory was on point herer what i mean is your had some cool ddepth to your words. great progression moved along smooth like a said but it also managed to keep me interested..good shit man.

zen. i refuse to type that other name.

this was dope shit bro..i gotta say your scene setting was out fucknig standing..though aesthetic i thought the HAs where placed nicely because i actually read those first in a quick movement of my eyes like a cheetah and i felt like the laughs where coming from every where...yeah lol. to the verse, your story was onpoint as well i mean aside from the great imagery you wrote a very alive piece..waht i mean is you brought the picture to life you gave it character great flow as well thouht it was just as smooth as mics piece....dope shit.

i got zen on this one thought his piece had a bit more meat... mic had a dope piece but i fet like zen had just a bit more to offer when compared.good battle fellas.

05-18-2013, 12:24 AM	#8
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	mic. smooth shit like always..felt like your backstory was on point herer what i mean is your had some cool ddepth to your words. great progression moved along smooth like a said but it also managed to keep me interested..good shit man. zen. i refuse to type that other name. this was dope shit bro..i gotta say your scene setting was out fucknig standing..though aesthetic i thought the HAs where placed nicely because i actually read those first in a quick movement of my eyes like a cheetah and i felt like the laughs where coming from every where...yeah lol. to the verse, your story was onpoint as well i mean aside from the great imagery you wrote a very alive piece..waht i mean is you brought the picture to life you gave it character great flow as well thouht it was just as smooth as mics piece....dope shit. i got zen on this one thought his piece had a bit more meat... mic had a dope piece but i fet like zen had just a bit more to offer when compared.good battle fellas. Last edited by Inno; 05-18-2013 at 12:27 AM.