Destroyer 2-0 Vs Schadenfreude 1-1 - DES WINS

Allen Knight · 09-12-2016, 01:36 PM

NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4

Due Thursday 12 pacific

Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling.

& dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted.

NO EXT, AT ALL.

@Destroyer
@Schadenfreude

Schadenfreude · 09-15-2016, 06:04 PM

.500 gawd, the weakest bars niggas ever wrote have slaughtered ya
I’m another case, cuz People vs Schad type different like court stenographers.

Destroyer · 09-15-2016, 09:45 PM

get smacked, stuck & gored. u got fans, but they're bored
I'm over schad doe, like all my bars do when stacked up to yours

Chemist · 09-16-2016, 01:24 AM

lol

des here tbh, felt smooth and tougher than schads line.

schad was cool but felt off for me

R!canTheoryz · 09-16-2016, 05:01 AM

Schad doe/ shadow. Refesnce is cool I enjoyed it but destroyer punch is not hard hitting at all I was expecting more sting I assume

Schad was cool but the set up is mehhh.

Vote. Dez

Greed · 09-16-2016, 05:07 AM

Schadenfreude line was decent. Took a second to confirm if it worked all ways and it does. Des could have been better if he had sad i over schad doe or something to make it make sense all ways. Small thing to harp on but thats the point on a one bar battle.

V Schadenfreude

sral · 09-16-2016, 07:30 AM

des here slightly

Inno · 09-16-2016, 12:45 PM

Fuck shad had but that slaughter ya and stenographer is
A mad stretch. Dope concept tho

Des with the smoothness of a baby ass

Des

Slechtn · 09-16-2016, 01:52 PM

I liked Schad's approach here but it lacked sting. I felt it was a bit stretched. I like the way Des set up his though. It hit more. My vote goes to Destroyer

Ghost1 · 09-16-2016, 02:13 PM

got des here, schad was dope....my only issue was with the back end meaning.....how does the stenographer type different in the case...? I guess ur case could be they type fast...which is different then reg people typing....but u said in the case....so now we have to say they are in the court typing....whats different about what they typing now? had potential tho concept was fire to me./ des wasn't crazy complez but I liked the name flip...since he does go by schad I didn't mind the half name flip...plus his name got 33 letters so yea lol....crisp wording and good delivery took des home here. another dope battle tho. dug this one.

v des

Pinot Grij · 09-16-2016, 11:51 PM

Vote -- Schad

His bar was super sophisticated - setup was nicely executed. From "case" to "People vs Schad" to the actual metaphor. The courtroom vocabulary was all there. Super clean. The metaphor was dope too, hit super hard when I first read it. It connected on multiple levels.

Des - same type wordplay you used for the "wit knees hit" last week. I like it, only problem is that "wit knees hit" is pronunced naturally. "Over Schad doe" - if anyone said "overshadow" in that manner, they'd sound retarded. Just felt a little more forced.

09-12-2016, 01:36 PM	#1
Allen Knight The Bad Guys. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,168 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899398	Destroyer 2-0 Vs Schadenfreude 1-1 - DES WINS NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4 Due Thursday 12 pacific Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling. & dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted. NO EXT, AT ALL. @Destroyer @Schadenfreude

09-15-2016, 06:04 PM	#2
Schadenfreude Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!! Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 1,408 Battle Record: 42-22 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Tag Team Titles - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 21049081	.500 gawd, the weakest bars niggas ever wrote have slaughtered ya I’m another case, cuz People vs Schad type different like court stenographers. __________________ Aali hupatikana kwa ghali.

09-16-2016, 01:24 AM	#4
Chemist Try this shit Join Date: Sep 2015 Location: uninhabitable Posts: 365 Battle Record: 5-11 Rep Power: 0	lol des here tbh, felt smooth and tougher than schads line. schad was cool but felt off for me __________________

09-16-2016, 07:30 AM	#7
sral Shrewd as evearthed Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 8,274 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899392	des here slightly __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

09-16-2016, 01:52 PM	#9
Slechtn Pay Homage Join Date: Sep 2016 Location: La Luna Posts: 254 Battle Record: 2-3 Rep Power: 0	I liked Schad's approach here but it lacked sting. I felt it was a bit stretched. I like the way Des set up his though. It hit more. My vote goes to Destroyer __________________

09-16-2016, 05:07 AM	#6
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,727 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975684	Schadenfreude line was decent. Took a second to confirm if it worked all ways and it does. Des could have been better if he had sad i over schad doe or something to make it make sense all ways. Small thing to harp on but thats the point on a one bar battle. V Schadenfreude

09-16-2016, 12:45 PM	#8
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	Fuck shad had but that slaughter ya and stenographer is A mad stretch. Dope concept tho Des with the smoothness of a baby ass Des

09-16-2016, 11:51 PM	#11
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195061	Vote -- Schad His bar was super sophisticated - setup was nicely executed. From "case" to "People vs Schad" to the actual metaphor. The courtroom vocabulary was all there. Super clean. The metaphor was dope too, hit super hard when I first read it. It connected on multiple levels. Des - same type wordplay you used for the "wit knees hit" last week. I like it, only problem is that "wit knees hit" is pronunced naturally. "Over Schad doe" - if anyone said "overshadow" in that manner, they'd sound retarded. Just felt a little more forced. __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.