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Old 09-11-2016, 06:21 PM   #11
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Just as the roses bloom- goodbye my love.
Tearing in two the valentine cards
Shared, as a sign of our trust.
We made promises but lied in our lust
I swear before the sky and the sun
Time won't turn to dust,
I finally had enough
Being just another tide in your thoughts
Forever inside a flux
Chaotically drifting beside your thoughts.
Despite the blatantly apparent psychic blocks
Our mindsets touched
Coalescing our eyes and tongues,
Viscerally titillating our primal urges.
Letting our stomach butterflies resurface
Interweaving our bodies like hybrid serpents
Dancing rhythmically until the final curtain
Noted by the therapeutic cries and murmurs
Released, yet lurking deep inside the person.
Until the moment,
We were wanderers divinely searching
Years of journey passing the same orchard
Going in circles around the same border.
Only to land in the same place of departure.
Incapable of realizing the painful torture
A self-loathing sadist with a brain disorder
With inflammation in the pineal gland.
Evolving but still attached to a vestigial past
Of a primeval mask so easily detached.
I saw he hit you and I laughed.
You weren't bleeding so I sat
And let it go, I thought like all creatures you'll adapt.
Unable to see the moment the glass broke
Grasping your throat passed comatose.
When I heard what happened, my nerves retracted
My mind went blank and fell into an abstraction
Eternally dwelling on time's passage
Subcelestial pattern disrupting my solar plexus axis.
Eclipsed into mental darkness
So long lasting it felt like it never started
But was forever part of paradise's deserted garden.

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