RD 1: Pinot Grij vs Eng - ENG WINS!

Cimmerian · 09-06-2016, 03:25 PM

Eng

Eng, I read your verse three times. You had some cool lines in there. For example, "There’s ecstasy through the looking glass." Despite the multiple reads, I could not figure out the precise topic you were touching on. It was cool you had some references to light, electricity, and a suit and tie. But I couldn't relate it all together. It flowed pretty well, thought.

Pinot Grij

Lately, it seems you have been taking the humorous approach, which has been working to you. I'm probably just too much of a prude, but some of the humor was a little low brow for my taste. It flowed pretty well and I was engaged through the entire read.

Because I felt Pinot more fully addressed the topic, my vote goes to him.

Vote: Pinot Grij

09-06-2016, 03:25 PM	#8
Cimmerian Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2013 Posts: 142 Rep Power: 2933499	Eng Eng, I read your verse three times. You had some cool lines in there. For example, "There’s ecstasy through the looking glass." Despite the multiple reads, I could not figure out the precise topic you were touching on. It was cool you had some references to light, electricity, and a suit and tie. But I couldn't relate it all together. It flowed pretty well, thought. Pinot Grij Lately, it seems you have been taking the humorous approach, which has been working to you. I'm probably just too much of a prude, but some of the humor was a little low brow for my taste. It flowed pretty well and I was engaged through the entire read. Because I felt Pinot more fully addressed the topic, my vote goes to him. Vote: Pinot Grij