Witty 1-0 Vs Destroyer 1-0 - DESTROYER WINS

Allen Knight · 09-06-2016, 12:24 PM

NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4

Due Friday 12 pacific

Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling.

& dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted.

NO EXT, AT ALL.

@Witty
@Destroyer

Witty · 09-06-2016, 02:39 PM

Hi there.

Witty · 09-09-2016, 05:02 PM

I stay copping gats for popping cats, or stash 'em til they go to war or get sold
If Des buy heaters it's cuz winters coming, and his old ass bones get sore when it's cold.

Destroyer · 09-09-2016, 10:28 PM

vest up. don't mean shit cuz des is gunning w/the shotty hard
& when u hear wit knees hit, trust it won't be from the bodyguard

Certain · 09-09-2016, 10:46 PM

Witty had a decent play on the "Destroyer is old" concept, but it such a toasted concept in general. Also, "winter is coming" felt very odd and unnecessary. The line reads better without that. Destroyer had a very nice nameplay that worked both ways.

Vote: Destroyer

Hearder Hearder · 09-09-2016, 11:04 PM

Des got it by far

Pinot Grij · 09-09-2016, 11:10 PM

Witty's is well concocted and the writing is top notch, but the punch is a little played and predictable.

Des put more effort into this than anyone this week, I believe. An interesting punch that hits well and works both ways. Feels a little over-cooked if I need to offer criticism.

Vote -- Des

Inno · 09-09-2016, 11:14 PM

Des got this

I felt like witty had a good setup and picked up in the second line but that winter is coming and from then on just felt forced.

Good battle tho

Saint · 09-09-2016, 11:27 PM

Des

fresher hit. wittys line was aight but need a better angle if it's an age diss. Des was a little stretched,
but cool.

sral · 09-10-2016, 02:33 AM

Des bruh

PancakeBrah · 09-10-2016, 02:44 AM

this is tough because i enjoy both battlers' presence in discussion a lot. BUT, witty seems to be down a lot. which isn't fair.

i got witty in this one fellas.

Barcotic · 09-10-2016, 01:18 PM

v/dest

way more creative

a heater flip just didn't do it for me

Ghost1 · 09-10-2016, 01:38 PM

V des

Cred · 09-10-2016, 04:18 PM

Destro got this jawn.

Chemist · 09-10-2016, 08:09 PM

vote for des here, witty was very wordy for me. decent concept but didn't quite awe me

Kin · 09-11-2016, 05:27 PM

Witty. Punch was nice... well worded too... good personal flip on the age...

Des.. nameplay was fresh... thought this was close...

Feel destro was a lil more creative..

Vote Des for the more complex flip

09-06-2016, 12:24 PM	#1
Allen Knight The Bad Guys. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,168 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899398	Witty 1-0 Vs Destroyer 1-0 - DESTROYER WINS NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4 Due Friday 12 pacific Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling. & dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted. NO EXT, AT ALL. @Witty @Destroyer

09-06-2016, 02:39 PM	#2
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,813 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 82986458	Hi there. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

09-09-2016, 05:02 PM	#3
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,813 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 82986458	I stay copping gats for popping cats, or stash 'em til they go to war or get sold If Des buy heaters it's cuz winters coming, and his old ass bones get sore when it's cold. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

09-09-2016, 10:46 PM	#5
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899403	Witty had a decent play on the "Destroyer is old" concept, but it such a toasted concept in general. Also, "winter is coming" felt very odd and unnecessary. The line reads better without that. Destroyer had a very nice nameplay that worked both ways. Vote: Destroyer __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

09-09-2016, 11:10 PM	#7
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195061	Witty's is well concocted and the writing is top notch, but the punch is a little played and predictable. Des put more effort into this than anyone this week, I believe. An interesting punch that hits well and works both ways. Feels a little over-cooked if I need to offer criticism. Vote -- Des __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

09-09-2016, 11:04 PM	#6
Hearder Hearder Banned Join Date: Aug 2016 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 0	Des got it by far

09-09-2016, 11:14 PM	#8
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	Des got this I felt like witty had a good setup and picked up in the second line but that winter is coming and from then on just felt forced. Good battle tho

09-09-2016, 11:27 PM	#9
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,227 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535865	Des fresher hit. wittys line was aight but need a better angle if it's an age diss. Des was a little stretched, but cool.

09-10-2016, 02:33 AM	#10
sral Shrewd as evearthed Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 8,274 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899392	Des bruh __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

09-10-2016, 02:44 AM	#11
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	this is tough because i enjoy both battlers' presence in discussion a lot. BUT, witty seems to be down a lot. which isn't fair. i got witty in this one fellas. __________________ If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me?

09-10-2016, 01:18 PM	#12
Barcotic Needs no introduction Join Date: Mar 2016 Location: Toronto Posts: 4,494 Battle Record: 29-31 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - Battle Arena Pics - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - BAL Battle Royale - NPL Roast Rep Power: 3061966	v/dest way more creative a heater flip just didn't do it for me

09-10-2016, 04:18 PM	#14
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899380	Destro got this jawn.

09-10-2016, 08:09 PM	#15
Chemist Try this shit Join Date: Sep 2015 Location: uninhabitable Posts: 365 Battle Record: 5-11 Rep Power: 0	vote for des here, witty was very wordy for me. decent concept but didn't quite awe me __________________

09-11-2016, 05:27 PM	#16
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662198	Witty. Punch was nice... well worded too... good personal flip on the age... Des.. nameplay was fresh... thought this was close... Feel destro was a lil more creative.. Vote Des for the more complex flip