RD 1: UnbornBuddha vs Vulgar - VULGAR WINS!

Cimmerian · 09-05-2016, 01:50 PM

Vulgar

A very creative take on the topic. It was humorous and engaging. I think in order to get all the creativity and references in, you had to sacrifice some flow. But it was a fun read nonetheless.

UnbornBuddha

Your verse flowed well. I had some trouble understanding how the verse related to the picture, which I assumed depicted media's affect on the mind. Hyper-technical constructive criticism: I don't think the term "medical cure" is commonly used. Medical treatment is provided in hopes of obtaining a cure. Anyway, it stuck out in my brain a little.

Vote: Vulgar

09-05-2016, 01:50 PM	#9
Cimmerian Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2013 Posts: 142 Rep Power: 2933499	Vulgar A very creative take on the topic. It was humorous and engaging. I think in order to get all the creativity and references in, you had to sacrifice some flow. But it was a fun read nonetheless. UnbornBuddha Your verse flowed well. I had some trouble understanding how the verse related to the picture, which I assumed depicted media's affect on the mind. Hyper-technical constructive criticism: I don't think the term "medical cure" is commonly used. Medical treatment is provided in hopes of obtaining a cure. Anyway, it stuck out in my brain a little. Vote: Vulgar