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Old 08-31-2016, 06:32 PM   #2381
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Now that I got this thread back in order the girls come out the woodwork, knowing damn well their ignorance could hurt the places I took words. I cook herbs, I cook birds, enough lines for you to get your books worth. So how do I look nerd? oh how bothersome kids get from the bottom rung, just look how they got their pride bottled up, look how much sense they make when they dont know what the problem was, you need to take some time out...wheres your mama son? she should revoke your posting privileges before you end up posting posthumous, she mustard that she needs to ketchup on what condiments. snack club anonymous, I can write whatever without feeling apologetic, column King kicking common sense at kindred spirits that need colleging, coke stained klonopin coasting in & out of consciousness...compliments to the chef for having a shred of common sense. crazy ass conduit craving a taste of the pussy I put my cock up in, egg dish dressed to look like a cockatoo. Cup filled to the brim when I review the doctrines to end the whole flock of you. this is comical, pathetic, not profitable, arrogance that could put a stop to you but fares better making fun of all of you, the train is unstoppable but the band wagon is filled to the top with dudes who circle jerk each other until there is a different spot to choose, choo choo tropical my smoke stack alone will leave you dusted quicker than it oughta do, rap game phenomenal so why make sense when you know what dollars do. you could get the bird man...bring the drama through. check my sneakers there equipped with ether for when I kick & beat ya into an alternate dimension where they send the weaker you forgetful dweeb ya
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Old 09-02-2016, 12:55 AM   #2382
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Face covered in acid, complicated bastard.
raging faster than a newbie with a pamphlet.
baby boy pampered by the decadent fashion.
visionary fascist with his preliminary standard.
automatic ammunition unloading with precision
sarcastic cerulean, I just blue myself...
theres no better way to say it, excuse myself.
dont need the hoes in the boats, I cruise myself.
hand on the bible, guilty, I accuse myself...
a message I approved myself, took the precautions
Im chill homey thats how it was looking in August.
another process perplexing my miniature author
the pressure will make it like living in Rwanda
deliver the liver picked from these tiny tourists.
other slimey wordsmiths that might decide to surface...
not this....my hand all I got left there is no write.
there are pigeons in the nest so now the bread goes high.
birdie so fly, crocodile skin with a pigeon toed slide.
bobble head perplexity winging in on your side...
like what up homey...this my bread get your own...slide...
Buddha palm press catch a sucker, catch a breath.
may the calm come bless this fucker neck & neck.
mortality in the fountain of youth toasted & splashed.
boasted & laughed, the hourglass keeps turning.
the words keep burning but so does the laps...
hamster wheel progression inside the mirrored image
another beer, spinach in a bowl to build muscle.
I never feared limits because they werent real...
if I ever feel troubled I look at the mirror....& lick it
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Old 09-02-2016, 01:30 AM   #2383
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Booker T. Washington's helipad

Forgetful. Regretful. A nestful of organs
Gut bacterial, compressed in New Orleans

The impact to my orbital bone had me seeing neutron stars

sugarcane juice

Breast reduction or a magnum opus enlargement?

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I am the Darkest of Members with the Maddest of Tempers,
Eccentric creator of Marvelous Adventures,
My punches Mangle Templars and Crumble all of Their Dentures,
Turn them to ash with the swing of a Sparkling Scepter,
The spiritual opposition will Hardly Remember,
This lyrical collision that leaves you Badly Dismembered,
Cant escape the Incredible Aim from the Heartless Spectre,
Fly on a spaceship navigating terrains and Trampling Pretenders,
I am caught between good and evil like a Odd Intervention,
My Passive Intentioni is dose the competition with Massive Injections,
Suicidal bars Branded Perfection,
I dial with stars and make a Godly Connection,
Against a crowd of professional you feeble art receives Rapid Rejections,
Stories like these are the ones they grand masters would Happily Mention,
A verse so sick its a Market for Infection,
Silent in the dark Dementors Await the Return,
of the One who Came to be Known and was Trained by the Firm,
Inside a capsule with scientists Lacing Germs,
Whose blessed Faith is to Earn when the Tables Turn,
receiving more than a Third of the Profit,
Sip the venom dripping from the cuts of Unholy Prophet,
Hit your cerebellum with a Stony Comet,
Till it pops out role on the Ground and Plummet,
the demons align to enter the cave where the Monster Dwell,
Puff and Swelled Proud as Well very Found of Hell,
An unreleased message the fallen ones will Come to Tell,
about the nightmarish dreams revolving metamorph inside his Ominous Mentality,
Labeled Abominable Source of Profanity,
Slowly Becoming a Reality, Clouding all like a Horrible Vanity,
Going back and forth challengers Know Its Insanity,
Followed by storm of Curse and Calamity,
Swallow this Pill of Hatred
while you wallow along in a Pit with Hades,
judging a battle between two beasts Sealed in Cages,
Streaming Phrases to Appease the Crazies,
instead of killing when they when Distilling Rages,
Initiated infront of an audience with no Grin in Faces,
Prophet in Line with a Corporate Mind,
So Intertwined with the Conflicts in Line,
Light up the skies Obviously Shine,
awaiting for tie Profit to Climb,
If you are still reading then your Soul is Now Mine,
My most precious weapon beware of all the Soldiers Confined,
the battle is about to get bloody so ready the Medi Kits,
The Commander of Deadly Hits with intention of Siphoning the Benefits,
Alluring with Shocking Intelligence Abusively Mocking the Regiments,
Bombarding Regiments Conducting Ungodly Experiments,
I am that looser who never scored with your Drunken Girl,
Instead I Complete the mission to win and start Touring the World,
Walk the Globe with Power Untold unfold punches cause your Core to Unfurl,
Comparing you to me is like Comparing a Stone with a Pearl,
Men of all ages with deep insight you might Know Some,
They can come from someone driving an expensive car to a Lone Bumm,
No longer defensive in wars with a growing pain in the heart now cold and So Numb,
New branches planted now come alive from the tree that was Torn Down,
Don't dare you call yourself a Sho Gun,
Cause we all know you are a coward who is Known to Run,
Never Around at Home scared to talk to your Own Son,
The Half man half Arachnid Revealing,
Brawn Hands Rapidly Eating the anatomy of Ravaged Weaklings
that will be Lively Streaming after all the Damage Receiving,
You couldnt Handle the Beating from the Marvelous Heathen,
leave your body Dangling from the Ceiling Mangled and Bleeding,
on top of the food where yo Family Eating,
The Raging Omen praying above Decapitated Opponents,
Caged with Torments, Blazing in Components,
Decided to sign the Sacred Contract and Follow Satan Ways
So fly now making contact with Alien Greys,
I Assault with Blazing Spheres,
See the future through Radiant Glares,
Of shards blasting apart Assailants Near,
The region major and Marvelous Rap Lover,
got Legions of Angels tucked under a Dark Cover,
So big I am All Over,
Call me alcoholic but today i am Not Sober,
Manipulating the system from Secular Bases,
Using blood to sign oats over Several Pages,
Invoking Lucifer's Phantom to trap opponents in Interstellar Mazes,
How can you defused atoms dare Wanna Face This,
When we all know you loose battles on a Regular Basis,
Well my Illustrious Main Aces are victorious on Revered Cases,
The Leader of the world most Feared Races,
Make them Dissappear without Clear Traces,
for trynna invade where me and hades Share Stages,
Guarding the mythical beast Frozen in Kryostasis,
Chained down with a Hundred Braces,
Serve a platter of your head in Golden Cases,
An abominable monster who Rose from the Dark,
Devouring the hopes of those shooting Guns in the Park,
Mending together pieces that were Broken Apart,
Salute and pay the Enigmatic Master,
Who is responsible for raising the Problematic Bastard,
The Einstein of lyrics with that Heavenly Flow,
My mind contain secrets too Deadly to Know,
Battle in my element feel the Energy Grow,
We wont call this beef caz you Already a Cow,
See the wounds open and I Am Going to Sew,
In this race you need to Thoroughly Row,
you cant catch me caz you are Going too Slow,
Smoke a Bird faster than these Herbs that i Blow,
Rat tricks dissapper within Bombs that we Throw,
Fame is Immense for those that Hopelessly Now,
Witness the hellish revenge for Confonting the Crow,
There is no Chance to Escape,
The Advance Ape in a Trance State,
Hot wire a car and crash through your Mom's Gate,
Enter the mind of the man with a Dark Cape,
Blasting Flames till you look like Charred Stake,
Smelly Shark Bait, My punches make your every Bar Bake,
then make you gather the pieces with a Damn Rake,
The Priest and the Reverent gather to Preach a Sentence,
at enemies Adrift in pain that Seems Endless,
The spirit that came to Feast on your Essence,
Walking over worthless Pieces of Remnants,
Getting paid to slaughter strange Emcees in Attentance,
The outcome wont change Even if you Bring your Defendants,
The head behind Mass Investments,
will have legends of this time Chopped in Segments,
Don't look at me caz we Got no Resentment,
Feuding in dreams we Collapsing the Present,
I am just a Cocky Peasant, Everything I say is Probably Unpleasant,
To the critics that stand behind the Godly Descendant,
This Hide and seek so start Counting you Dummy,
Caz Nothing gonna stop when we Come for the Money,
Defeat you with a spectacular Verse that is Funny,
Open the tabernacle Disperse the Unholy Curse of the Mummy,
Now its time to post a Rhyme that is Sicker,
and see who can slip through the Line Quicker,
Enter the Mind of a Killer, every Line Iller,
When it comes to Life i am the Giver,
Get deep inside like a Knife in your Liver,
Toss your corpse on the Side of the River,
A Murder cold enough to give a Wifey Shivers,
The Wisest Wizzard enchant with spells and give Mind Seizures
Aligning Scriptures to stabb like Knife and Scissors,
The Brother Dreamer Under Achiever managed to Conquer the Leader,
With lessons like this I am Beyond just a Teacher,
A friend of death like i am Down with the Reaper,
Punish Cheaters and Slice Tongues with a Rusty Cleaver,
Hot enough to give a Ghost a Fever...
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Old 09-02-2016, 01:52 PM   #2385
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miss me with all that bitterness
coat sleeve dazzled with a pigeon flip
pen game came with a gorilla grip
girl got giraffe neck for this elephant
rhyme game elegant, mind game excellent.
got a problem looking at that mop up
got her bobbin all in love & caught up.
baby girl stop it this isnt what you wanted.
funny how I talk to these bitches is how I talk to these bitches....
get it?
write to the limit, so if you like to spit it...
cut the check home boy you know how I get it.
in the ville feeling pleasant, easing my senses...
with my balls causing a racket just like tennis.
better forget it if you thinking you gonna outdo me
what you are about to see is the route to me.
adventures that sounded sweet but ended up fatal.
girls heaven sent presence got me sending up cradles
when they pass her molars they setting up tables...
handing out drinks for that marathon that ensues
whose gonna make the stomach first? ask the tubes.
ask the trachea...thats the game for ya.
at the leftovers like a motherfucking animal...
or a cannibal...whatever the aim is for ya.
saw a goth that believed God was a rock...
she brought a broth stewed in the blood of Ewoks
a chatterbox that chattered on about Babylon
sin & the battle on salvation & fragile thoughts.
beg for forgiveness...then pass it on...
beg for a witness...then pass it on...
egg for the sickness...then pass it on...
consider whatever you want...then pass it on...
I once wrote a passage on the lack of maturity
looked at myself & laughed at my lack of purity
then reflected on how I act so worry free.
got a morning glass of Schnapps & a migraine.
coffee on the rocks & I got a time frame...
from 9 to 5 you need my thoughts on my ways..
highways that deliver my package off to my place
listen to what...I say...what did I say?
got a back pain from carrying this rap game..
a lot of writers have forgotten how to use the backspace...
Im back because I carry it that way....hey...hey....hi
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Old 09-02-2016, 03:18 PM   #2386
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Right feeling them posts dog
Got more rhythm to dem texts then dancing to a slow song
Don't need ya opinions. Y'all can keep ya thoughts.
Cause y'all like some dalmation way ya all up on it like spots.
Guess I got to switch it up.
cause ya arteries be dreary and filled with drugs.
Not trying and I still keep netcees at bay.
You best be retreating way I defeat these lames.
All in all Y'all some heavy hitters right?
You having visions son, still can't picture mics.
I gots to stay on the rise like inflation son.
But ya rhymes so history they sound ancient Holmes.
This like the NY times way I catching the front page bro.
Real homies stay down, you just out of range hoe.
I gonna surround y'all like some caution tape.
Guess I'm hitting the start button way my lines paused the game.
Yeah you have yet to come with something dope.
How you even logged on this site, ain't no one knows.
Guess I'll be sticking my neck out like I was a fuming giraffe.
People like pipe down all you do is pick concepts outta the trash.
I'll keep it subtle though. You ain't want me to correct ya ass.
If you was a popquiz every student expect to pass.
For real my shit straight, cats be like yeah now it's your turn.
Got ya feeling my shit too cats like yeah we know we sound like some turds.
For real if y'all think it through, I up early like the sun in the morning
In fact ya shit be rank y'all only know as much as ya television be reporting.
Fuck it y'all be some mimes y'all aint saying nothing.
I'll be doing marathons and I ain't even in a race er running.
You say you I'll with the texts...
But only thing you addressing be a stamp you bought for twenty five cents.
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Old 09-03-2016, 12:06 PM   #2387
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La Costra Nostra toasting to the order.
the vintage feel, quill dealing with the soldiers.
compliment coasters & folded naps.
nose fizzling soda that we hold in the back
odious opus ostracized by Oprah...
or your local celeb, slumped over in the back
revolver removed from the holster to his back
the violin carries out the message at last
made a break for freedom, arrested out back.
most are quick to twist their lip & lie son.
so its unbelievable to think that you might son.
the struggle makes it worse when your tied up....
sinking to the abyss you fade as the light does.
candlesticks & birthday hats, we welcome you home.
crustacean vacation, give a new shell for his dome.
the heat set ground work for proper construction.
nerds should be out about & watching the public.
put that pain to the test & aim for the chest.
accept my own faults & then blame them for the rest.
whatever they submit is a slave to the stress.
its basic & less....the equivalent of hatred finessed
theres so many pages in a pen, up to 810...
I grovel at my own nonsense with a grin & just laugh
forget what day it is & take a sip from whats in the glass.
rosebud, I ride it out from here.
peep the brain thats sliding out your ear
behemoth slamming down another beer.
its all good bwoi, I can handle it from here
if any other challengers appear..
we can turn this to the 86 calendar year
put 70 seconds on the the timer....ohhhhh yeeeeeeaaaaa
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I'm still like a textbook full a subjects and topics
I be off my shit lately but stay on the rise like economics
For real bro I got no trouble knocking some lines out
Just like musical chairs bro you get knocked out this round
Gotta keep a low profile I be a real threat to ya livelihood
Y'all on some comic shit catch ya dressed up like mightymouse
Yeah y'all be in awe see cause my shit gold even when taking a breather
My shit take awhile to comprehend and ya bitch is a real curious like my text keep her eager
I'll smack cats with meat cleavers
And just like a hotplate bro my flows stay close to heaters
Got ya cream in da freezer had to search fa baskets like it was Easter
Shit bro this just a teaser I need some concrete objects to point out
I'm high irregularly but you cats still can't fit my crown
Shit I had to dethrone you but boy you far from sumn noble
It be amusing at time y'all style ancient like roads built with cobble
For real people stunned by my lines
Cause just like the sum stare at these flows too long you be going blind
Keep affiliating with whack faggots
I'll be like customs bro all up in ya hand baggage
I'm free with my thought and more accepting than most
You be wicked strange always starting shit when we know you really gross
I'm like a flower planting seeds in the dirt ya plants still won't grow
I'm like a boat way I flow my rhymes keep emcees afloat
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this is that performance art born abroad.
one man band stand as Im tearing portions off.
laughing inside like...you know whats in store for yall?
my mind is a river as it starts coursing off...
without a paddle Im about to babble into Babylon
ride that with a the white horse I put my saddle on.
tomahawking Stephen Hawking a well known Capricorn.
enter the portal of mortals where my magic forms.
recite a spell where I like to dwell when crashing bwoi...
my side arm came 100% guaranteed satisfaction bwoi...
taking your lights out with that silly clapping noise.
clap on, clap off, the automatic is ready for action bwoi!!!!!
spell caster that felt well mannered to get your skull examined
skull fractures & dull laughter, stare from a delightful vantage.
you work with what you saw, I just work with the saw
take a dip in the crystal ball & peep the world you surface beyond
observe the fall & how the water runs when purchased off...
years of abuse to coincide with a bottle of vodka
head sunken while ears echo the wallows of blah blah
no problem, starting tomorrow I deal with it manana
looking chill while being followed in the bahamas
trench coated french toast.
miracle worker head to toe.
eraserhead with the lead close.
speaker phone & a dead tone.
the voice in my head said....let go
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Damn lively campfire bees chant loudly
Tramps paltry on damp side streets
IT'S THE CHAMP! Proudly as Jambowski
vinyl ledgers, oak lumber, Scantron papers
spinalstretchers, ghostbusters, and tampon slaters

Who eradicated Chicken Soup for the Soul?

How elegant? More elegant than Gweneth Paltrow on an eagle's back

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Don't know where to put the colorful television plugs
Portmanteau. Island for a family of one. Helluva visual cue.
I called the cable guy, but a Fiberoptic Mirage
appeared at the door
bootlegged channels were offered from several dimensions
It spun me around when I tried to make the Matrix position
"This plug goes into your chin cleft, makes a nice fit, don't it?"

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Is it because they develop a profound patience for bad positions on the board?
Is chess a game for a Joe Schmoe, but a lifestyle for the homeless?

I was talking to a philosophy major and he noted how they were better competition than normal folks. Memorizing moves, memorializing a groove. Step forward, fire hydrant on concrete block 212. Police department stone angel. Oaf Grayskul. Rogue Gabriel. What characterizes most betrayals?

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Sunken ship off the shore of Atlantis
another trip to where you hold all the answers
in the room, you got that magic, that Abra Cadabra
silk sheets that lay in the hamper...
tailored fit for each curve & crevice
make a melody burn like Hendrix.
assortment of cards saying you deserve this credit.
last Summer spending our earnings in Tibet
looking for a center, while Im suppressing ya chest.
like breathe baby you know you fuckin with the best
the game Im running is like checkers to chess
better get undressed & ready for this revealing sunset.
say your prayers & douse my flame.
make the coach call it & take ya out the game.
mufuckers upset with what Im about to say...
vernacular Cool J when you around the way.
my attire is like Montana with a pound of yay...
chaser as acidic as the next pair of gumshoes
stop being a dick & learn how to have fun...dude...
test these lessons sensei taught me in Kung Fu.
I throw down chops & come out kicking...
almost like your breath. woo boy Im tripping...
need new kicks advertising telling kids to shape up.
every drop covering every aspect like rain does
chaos riddled in tainted clothes in a change cup.
sweet scent of Pina Colada in the elevator on its way up...
360 view of the city & a pair of mittens for a koala suit
game too silly, flame to a wick, mission impossible
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Old 09-09-2016, 03:05 PM   #2393
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I ain't gonna pick ya verse apart
Cause you ain't shit like ya rhymes is all fart
For real I hate to criticize
It's like a popquiz way no one thought to revise
Keep correcting me bro it's a weak approach
I'm like a boat way I keep all these emcees rhymes afloat
The cypher thread feels empty these days
You be on some hi-speed shit way shit feel like a race
Gotta blindside you and you start having vision
Way life got so many conditions
It's clear why none a y'all pump like some pistons
I ain't need a piece of ya life holmes
Cause you like a dilapidated apartment it bout to be foreclosed
I'm not trying still sound accurate as fuck
No matter how moving ya theme is ya verse still ain't hitting in the clutch
For real I'd pass you the ball but you airball under pressure
No worries though my lines keep gangsters under the weather
But I'm glad you finally stepped ya game up
You like some pills I be snorting sumn I gots to crush
I gotta cremate your ass way I deliver you into the afterlife
Coulda mistook you for a ghost way ya conducting electricity like some kite
It's funny you should stick to ya instinct kid
Got a hole in ya sweater guess ya best learn how to knit
I'm trying to attempt to spit some knowledge
But I been digging holes like a rodent you could call me a possum
Guess you've heard enough
This be the front page of a magazine call it inside stuff
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Old 09-09-2016, 03:55 PM   #2394
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flip like...what!?! X gonna give it to ya
Arf Arf this tech is gonna spit spit at ya.
whats a nitwit to ya, be realistic wont ya?
but you just want to be a dipshit dont ya?

its okaaayyyy...


Medallion shimmer like calm waters.
pimp hand strong, the big Don Dada.
my flow smooth enough to run off a otter.
Fozzy Bear lines, Im clever like waka...
a word that feels so much better with Dogma
one life, living to the end of Contra...
Last Dragon, look at me glistening with Aura
Aurora Borealis, the core of the Northern Atlantic
the source of evolution moving backwards...
hairy man, scary man, supporter of the dairy man
milk game kills lames in ill ways, Im Carrie...man
I dont know how to carry that....period..
homeboy mad because I dont get serious.
boy Im on Pandora listening with a camcorder
about to take it back like a bad order...
chain getting it in the club, Roxbury...
I was chilling like Emillliiiooo...Roxbury
making ya girl head nod...Roxbury....
watch that land slide & see who the....rocks bury
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Old 09-09-2016, 04:13 PM   #2395
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I'm dying man ya rhymes is fucking killing it
You be sum chewing tobacco something that be called dip
Im loving the references though
You be sum seeds that just ain't want to grow
I'm not bothered tho still gonna kick it with you
I'm a single truth like the moon is round or the sky is blue
Shit sounds like sum shit you can bump in ya whip
I'm in excellent condition like my lines got the perfect pitch
Nevertheless we all make mistakes in life
Y'all cats be like some bats way ya rhymes stay on the fly
Gotta keep my flows in rotation
Cause my lines always on the rise like inflation
Either way we all in this together
I be like some indians way my shit holy to ya beliefs like feathers
Can't read my smoke though when the truth written in the sky
I'm like please don't distract me while I working like a dog working for the blind
Guess life just be full of emotions
You could call me Walt Disney way my rhymes stay frozen
It's all about the finishing product
Got me like Benjamin Franklin way I got electricity to conduct
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Old 09-09-2016, 05:45 PM   #2396
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conduit riding out with your sympathy
beg that shit differently
send a centimeter to a centipede.
hitting like Willie Nelson in the trees.
mind martyr watering indica seeds.
eons ahead no matter the distance you see.
snapped off quick as a limb to a tree.
you wholesale, Im limited edition release.
your tears in a bottle, a perfect addition to the sea.
homey stay salty.
run the game its all me.
jumping the gorge on skis.
coming down like a Whomp...
see?
the jewel is in the gauntlet
get schooled & held under the armpit
man is the monster, mystery machine.
life is a search engine with history diseased
but if shes a bitch I get it in her with ease
a ball room floor thats exquisitely clean.
a secret withheld thats giving me peace...
scrimmage with a double dribble beneath.
a poster for the new up & comers...
who are just reboots of dumb & dumber
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Corrupted plumber checking on the flow of sewage pipes
It was known he was supposed to fumigate for a local fluid heist
Applying glue to white flexible plastic, he lubed the grooves
Abused the droogs, and blew the fuel device
for the whole goddamn city water mane - aloof of human rights
all while plugged into his headphones, Roots Manuva
My mama always told me I resembled a cute Medusa
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Old 09-10-2016, 10:06 AM   #2398
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Yo you deffo got ya freestyle down pat
Get chased up a tree and down an alley like a pussy cat
Guess I gots to readdress some a ya emcees on the net
You aint no scale or key so i aint got nothing to fret
Finally figured you fuckers out after only four lines
Yall could be pitch dark still aint black as night
Say you spit rhymes but never handle mics
You like a seing eye dog way ya leading the blind
Cant see nothing broken so aint shit for me to fix
Coulda built myself some real estate way you throw up so many bricks
Guess you could try and question me
But ive already travelled the world and the seven seas
Aint nothing much for me to say
Im off the rictor scale like an earthquake
I gotta end this at some point
Gotta flip it in the air like i was a coin
Still gonna drop this afterall
Yall be fake as some barbie doll
Thats about it for now cant think of any knowledge to spit
Yall be burning like i was lighting candle wix
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Sunken eyes dwelling in the face of last week
inferiority & fear mixed to chase my last dream
cheap liquor is gone, already wasted that seed.
puking on memory lane, already tasted that street.
a trail that tailed back, I created that lead...
the clues and the traps that are baited by me.
a map that helped when erasing back streets.
alleys & escape routes changing that need...
a live lead that will eventually find a dead end
the smell of rot, the horrid aroma of dead flesh
maggots of tomorrow crawling over the dead...dead.
your fate awaits at the end of the cheese maze
there isnt enough nonsense left for me these days
so set up the exercise wheel & water for each face.
put the monkey in the middle, its truth keep away.
sign on the door, do not disturb, quiet & keep away.
just another experiment they get to see today.
would write it in latin but you still couldnt seize the day.
truth & lie in the balance lets see what a Libra weighs
whats on their mind? what does their Caesar say?
peel their scalp back & let us see the ways....
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Damn son i thought you almost had it
Guess you got some shit to put together like paper clips
But for real i had so much hope for you
Gotta give you a hint like i gave you a clue
Man i tries to let you know as much as i can
You like a wireless mic you aint need no stand
I wish i could hold ya lyrics close to my heart
Im like something you can race with call me a gokart
Guess i could just end it all there
Im a full house kid you just be a low pair
You could extinguish the fire by not providing oxygen
Im like moses been leading my people on an exodus
Its funny all things come back full circle
But im like tv programming way i fastforward theough the commercials
Gotta admit i will be on this site from sunup to dusk
Im like pizza way i aint eating the crust
Sorry man but you easy to read like an open book
They say im a secret recipe sumn for the fam to cook
I know its hard to put me down like a goodbook
Im in between ya classes like a homeroom
Gotta teeat this like a bbq way i gonna cookout
Im providing yall with a lense if ya got bad eyesite
Its time to put the kids to bed as if it was nighttime
Im sorry for this like sumn i wish i could redefine
Im like grapes way im being used to make some wine
Gonna recreate my life like a butterfly
Its coming to an end like how things start dying after the summertime
I wish i could recollect all my thoughts homie
Its like buying product from sony it be a good way to spend ya money
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