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obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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Vulgar definitely has the VOTW here. This is just a crazy, fantastical take on the topic. What's so good about it too, is that, he didnt really use anything like a conveyor belt, or a factory setting. He literally scoped the image for what it was. Propaganda. Wrote a verse about propaganda, and that's it. I almost forgot about the image, scrolled up and just said 'very good'. The contrast between actual relics from different eras is another layer he peeled back for the audience to glare at. Again, this is very very obvious fiction, but it's a good story. A lot of things that are fiction are crazy and can create emotion. Doesn't mean the reality of the situation or writing is any less important, or good. This reminds me of a parallel fictional program, The Man In The High Castle. It's indeed fiction, that's the point, where the writers captivate is in the story and how it captures the audience in emotion, detail, etc - basically everything that makes something good. I think to compare the fantasy/reality of it is weird cause it's very obvious the whole point of the entire verse. AMAZYKLON was good, almost read like a stock market listing. It just has so many layers, and similar to Pinots verse, had humor but displayed another level beyond that. The factual metaphors, the keywords of what actually was, but again, with a childish, serious acceptance of the entire consumer/propaganda aspect. I feel this was masterfully done because of the lack of actual time spent into it. I think this was the first verse up - it just writes itself. All you had to do was add your spin, your signature and polish it and you there you have it. Adding all the extra stuff was just an extra spin to an already entrenched tye-dye. Unborn The thing I quickly noticed here is that, you started off with Max, as a character. The character. This is similar to what Pinot did with Joey, but it's actually just abandoned all the mechanics of his storyline and you added your own spin to to it. Unborn style. The thing here is that, something I didnt tell Pinot, is that I HATE when stories start off with, hey I'm Johnny blah blah, and heres my thingy thing. It's just so overdone at this point (anagram for point is pinot, btw) I actually almost eyeroll when it happens. Quote:
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