Final Round: Unbornbuddha vs Frank (FRANK WINS CHAMPIONSHIP 7-2)

asylum · 07-29-2016, 08:16 PM

buddha - i think your closing couplet was the strongest part of your verse. your brevity juxtaposed to franks style made for an interesting battle. i think you bounced around a bit on your concept and took a more topical approach, dangerous choice against a storyteller like Frank.

Frank - did you make your second line two lines on purpose? lol. I enjoyed your spin on the topic, very creative. Well rounded verse, long winded but enjoyable nonetheless. I think your final touches really gave you the edge in this battle.

MVGT Frank for the more enjoyable and well rounded verse. I simply enjoyed his more.

07-29-2016, 08:16 PM	#7
asylum Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 999 Battle Record: 7-5 Rep Power: 8214211	buddha - i think your closing couplet was the strongest part of your verse. your brevity juxtaposed to franks style made for an interesting battle. i think you bounced around a bit on your concept and took a more topical approach, dangerous choice against a storyteller like Frank. Frank - did you make your second line two lines on purpose? lol. I enjoyed your spin on the topic, very creative. Well rounded verse, long winded but enjoyable nonetheless. I think your final touches really gave you the edge in this battle. MVGT Frank for the more enjoyable and well rounded verse. I simply enjoyed his more.