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UnbornBuddha · 07-17-2016, 12:52 AM

Entertaining, albeit it seems like a keystyle. Well a lot of your pieces read like keystyles. Good fun keystyles though, filled with melodic rhythm and hip hop extravaganza. I enjoy the manipulation of the schemes and how you mesh them with a braggadocio flair. It is entertaining. Its something that captivates, but it is a captivation that is superficial. It doesn't penetrate into the core of a person's heart. It doesn't give hope, or bring insight to how you think or how that can relate to their experiences. Rather it fills the reader's mind with a flurry of comedic streams of thoughts. And doing this well is commendable. It is its own style. For me, it amuses me but doesn't really do much else. It's has semblance to some of MC Juice's renditions, stylistically speaking.
Thanks.

07-17-2016, 12:52 AM	#5
UnbornBuddha Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,008 Battle Record: 23-10 Champed - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 5 Rep Power: 23856379	Entertaining, albeit it seems like a keystyle. Well a lot of your pieces read like keystyles. Good fun keystyles though, filled with melodic rhythm and hip hop extravaganza. I enjoy the manipulation of the schemes and how you mesh them with a braggadocio flair. It is entertaining. Its something that captivates, but it is a captivation that is superficial. It doesn't penetrate into the core of a person's heart. It doesn't give hope, or bring insight to how you think or how that can relate to their experiences. Rather it fills the reader's mind with a flurry of comedic streams of thoughts. And doing this well is commendable. It is its own style. For me, it amuses me but doesn't really do much else. It's has semblance to some of MC Juice's renditions, stylistically speaking. Thanks.