Cashius vs MFTastick - Cashius wins

Saint · 07-01-2016, 07:25 PM

Cash got it on consistency and was fluid

MF came good, I thought that abes odyssey line was creative and I could tell he did work in thus verse, my only complaint is the execution was repetitive. 'im this.. call it, thats a etc' just switch up how you deliver shit by rewording things and imo that would help you elevate in a way. some thing feel wordy at times but if its some metaphor you're squeezing in the line then ok, but take out unnecessary words. Cash had hallmark a good throwback personal then was solid thru out. bit deeper and harsher.. more thought out yet direct.

vote cash

07-01-2016, 07:25 PM	#11
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,251 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535868	Cash got it on consistency and was fluid MF came good, I thought that abes odyssey line was creative and I could tell he did work in thus verse, my only complaint is the execution was repetitive. 'im this.. call it, thats a etc' just switch up how you deliver shit by rewording things and imo that would help you elevate in a way. some thing feel wordy at times but if its some metaphor you're squeezing in the line then ok, but take out unnecessary words. Cash had hallmark a good throwback personal then was solid thru out. bit deeper and harsher.. more thought out yet direct. vote cash