Week 12: Contenders: Frank vs. INNOVATOR - [FRANK INNOVATOR BOTH WIN] ADVERSE BREATHLESS JESODIST WITTY LOSE BY NO SHOW

Razah · 05-26-2016, 12:26 PM

Dope verse Frank.

Haha, finally a verse that wasn't too long for me, didn't have any unnecessary words to make it seemed like you rhymed more, and you get no showed. Sucks man.

Anyways, really dope verse. Usually not a fan of using too many of the same rhymes word, ie, celebration, dedication, inspiration, basically all that end in ion because it seems like a cheap way out as far as rhyming, but the way you placed them made sense to me, so that was dope.

Besides that, same typical Frank shit. Bunch of internals, solid story, good stuff man.

05-26-2016, 12:26 PM	#1
Razah rockkFresh Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: Chicago. Posts: 1,088 Battle Record: 8-10 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 11328545	Dope verse Frank. Haha, finally a verse that wasn't too long for me, didn't have any unnecessary words to make it seemed like you rhymed more, and you get no showed. Sucks man. Anyways, really dope verse. Usually not a fan of using too many of the same rhymes word, ie, celebration, dedication, inspiration, basically all that end in ion because it seems like a cheap way out as far as rhyming, but the way you placed them made sense to me, so that was dope. Besides that, same typical Frank shit. Bunch of internals, solid story, good stuff man.