Week 11: UnbornBuddha vs Jesodist [JESODIST 3-2]

Frank · 05-20-2016, 04:05 AM

Pardon the brevity, fellahs

Jesodist, first time reading something from you that isn't demonic. You couldn't help yourself though and added a hellish line towards the very end. Lots of grammatical errors and countless miss spellings that there is no excuses for. But the Storyline seems ike a genuine bully scenario that could pass for a real life vent, like one aimed at the racist posters of the AOWL. Reminded me of the movie Cary. Check it out. Unbornbuddahs first half was psychoanalyzing psycho babble. Great insight into the mind of a serial killer type. As the events transpired the heinousness of it all was all rather chilling. Sorry for not giving this read the breakdown it derserved. Voted Jesodist.

05-20-2016, 04:05 AM	#1
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	Pardon the brevity, fellahs Jesodist, first time reading something from you that isn't demonic. You couldn't help yourself though and added a hellish line towards the very end. Lots of grammatical errors and countless miss spellings that there is no excuses for. But the Storyline seems ike a genuine bully scenario that could pass for a real life vent, like one aimed at the racist posters of the AOWL. Reminded me of the movie Cary. Check it out. Unbornbuddahs first half was psychoanalyzing psycho babble. Great insight into the mind of a serial killer type. As the events transpired the heinousness of it all was all rather chilling. Sorry for not giving this read the breakdown it derserved. Voted Jesodist. __________________ *VETWORK*