Week 10 Contendership Match: NYCSPITZ vs Breathless [NYCSPITZ WINS 7-0 SHUTOUT]

[Razah]

Enjoyed NYC's verse so much more than Breathless. Breathless kind of felt rush, and the only tie in I see with the topic was mentioning a still frame picture..

The sky turned white in a muted and angelic explosion
and the last man on earth...laid back as a relic of soldiers

Probably my fav' couplet from NYC. The build up was perfect if you ask me. You didn't write too much where I got bored, it was just the right amount. Good shit on that. A lot of cats write too much (for me) and I end up disliking a verse due to that. Like I said, breathless felt rushed. Easy vote in my eyes

vNYC

[timeless]

NYC, using solipsism as an entry was dope. My two cents if this were a Frank vote. Beautiful language as always to win over most that read, in such short length that only a few of us could attain how damaging it could be to an opponent. Enjoyed this through and through, haveno qualms really.

Breathless, smooth start, profession invalid. Notably forced wordplay sticks out like a sore dick, bringing your authors voice to a minimum getting shot at on Normandy by myself and a few others probably. I get your approach, it just didn't work. Your timing was crucial here obviously, but still I appreciate the effort to show and actually compile a verse worth of thoughts even if they were fried from the get-go.

V. Nyc