Week 9 Contenders Match: (3-0) Adverse vs. (3-1) MMLP (ADVERSE WINS 4-1)

[Razah]

MMLP, I think I would've liked it more if you kept things subtle. I felt like, from the jump, you told us what the topic was and that just made things predictable / made things feel like filler. Although, I thought the whole King of Pop / Prince flip was pretty dope. Good rhyming and all that bullshit, I just felt like you could've wrote the same thing, been more low key about it, and let me be like, 'ohhh he's talking 'bout Prince', but Nah.

Adverse, I literally enjoyed the whole second half more than the first, which is a good thing for you. I really didn't like the beginning half, but the second part got me into it.

Trudging around the scene, I throw the vanity down..
Destroy the banister throwing pieces towards the fans in the crowd
I'm like an animal now, removed from its cage and confused
The look on their faces is amused, this place is basically a zoo
Telling them this burden chained to me, ain't shit it's just a ruse
No matter what I do they'll still degrade me in reviews

That part was dope to me. The rhyming was a bit choppy here & there, but overall, pretty solid. Tough vote but, Im'a have to go with Adverse. MMLP's concept was sick, it just wasn't delivered how I would have wanted to read it. *shrugs.

vAdverse