Week 8: Breathless vs Mr. J (BREATHLESS WINS 4-3)

asylum · 04-27-2016, 04:33 AM

Wow this battle blew me away, two excellent verses.

Mr. J, i truly enjoyed your angle on the topic once you got into the characters. I think you wandered around for a little while in the beginning. Ive been starting to do my warm up in story mode and come back and edit later, you started straight topical then transitioned.. It was cool.. Not the most reliable approach, but you stuck to the tone of the picture well and i enjoyed it regardless.

Breathless you did a great job here. I am thoroughly impressed with your work. I noticed the audio pop up, but ill get to enjoy that tomorrow when im on a computer now that ive voted. Your piece in it's entirety was a great interpretation of the picture. I was enveloped by this piece, incredibly immersive. Youre definitely warming up and I am thrilled I was able to persuade you to sign in. Nice work.

Breathless took this for me this week. It was too clean. Both competitord dropped amazing work. Thanks to both.

04-27-2016, 04:33 AM	#6
asylum Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 999 Battle Record: 7-5 Rep Power: 8214211	Wow this battle blew me away, two excellent verses. Mr. J, i truly enjoyed your angle on the topic once you got into the characters. I think you wandered around for a little while in the beginning. Ive been starting to do my warm up in story mode and come back and edit later, you started straight topical then transitioned.. It was cool.. Not the most reliable approach, but you stuck to the tone of the picture well and i enjoyed it regardless. Breathless you did a great job here. I am thoroughly impressed with your work. I noticed the audio pop up, but ill get to enjoy that tomorrow when im on a computer now that ive voted. Your piece in it's entirety was a great interpretation of the picture. I was enveloped by this piece, incredibly immersive. Youre definitely warming up and I am thrilled I was able to persuade you to sign in. Nice work. Breathless took this for me this week. It was too clean. Both competitord dropped amazing work. Thanks to both.