Week 7: Mr. J vs. Artifice (ARTIFICE WINS 7-0 SHUTOUT)

breathless · 04-19-2016, 01:48 PM

Artifice - fuckin Neil De grasse Tyson up in the bitch. This was hot, like big bang hot. I can't really critique anything, honestly. This was super.

J - killer audio friendly flow, but the repeating words sort of mehhed me, road, buzz, etc.. I like the way you twisted the story, but, like, wtf? What happened to stabbing Julie, or whatever that first bit was about, lost me on why you even included details, but, it was still cool

Vote - art

04-19-2016, 01:48 PM	#7
breathless Master of Beastiality Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Lansing, Mi Posts: 368 Battle Record: 4-6 Rep Power: 0	Artifice - fuckin Neil De grasse Tyson up in the bitch. This was hot, like big bang hot. I can't really critique anything, honestly. This was super. J - killer audio friendly flow, but the repeating words sort of mehhed me, road, buzz, etc.. I like the way you twisted the story, but, like, wtf? What happened to stabbing Julie, or whatever that first bit was about, lost me on why you even included details, but, it was still cool Vote - art __________________ I used to be amazing... http://soundcloud.com/dancourser/sets