Championship Match: Orc 7-0 vs Tic 6-1 - (ORC WINS)

Saitama · 04-16-2016, 05:56 PM

This fgt loves text vets. Check his style, Fanfare is heavy
You Kiss Ass…& biting But was just a reflex from being down there already
I liked this angle, could've been worded stronger..

Actin like you brought the NBL back on ya own, you’re wacked as it is
Mags remind us of ya verses. Take alllll the credit but don’t write half’a the shit
cool personal...maybe not so relevant now, but not bad

& Fuck ya nationality. Idc if you Irish, German or attention whore
I’ll smash a beer Origin bottle over ya head til you can’t remember yours
I dont want to like this, it almost dont work both ways but the origin /irish drinking thing were decent tie ins..

Despised Cashius ever since that S&F loss, leavin ya face smashed
And knowing ya moms a Dime just gives you all the more reason to hate Cash
You lost me here bro, dime/cash nah

Dude loves his broad but I’ll end that puta, fag
Stab the bitch…then watch ya 2nd Half Collapse like the Utah Jazz
Nice concept. wording/execution was eh

I’m tougher than Orc. Cut ya dome off & watch vitals plummet for sport
Slice ya abdomen, stuff ya Head inside ‘n watch you Stomach the Thought
This was a big miss imo. but it made me laugh, wth lol

Whattup Orc Jr?

Lemme show you how to do it proper,

You'll get Iced in a second. Knifed in the Neck til ya life is bogus
& these Blades of Glory will take ya Head Off. we call that the Iron Lotus
Not bad. I had an idea like this...ok opener

You bit my wholeee steez; now u tryna get them bars off?!
Dog if YOU have a Signature Style, you're ending letters with ''Regards, Orc''
Ok personal on em, feels familiar in approach i.e signature

Orcs vision is legendary. & u tryna copy this? dude stop...
Quit tryna get that Burd's Eye View before you get Dropped from a Rooftop
Decent flip of a bird line I've seen & used..

O's cool w/ Sucka, Shazo & Riff. I'm even friendly with Seanzo
But you don't fuck with them RM boys cuz they always mention that Longnose
Not bad.. seen a few tic/longnose lines - imo

Been hearing biter lines alll season. That shit is a waste
&&&If this dude calls me a Shark it's ironic with that fucking Fin on his face
Homie is next & the masks black, Carbines gripped if it's past rap
Orc's the Kobe of text & if them Two .30s Get Shot then this your Last Match

Fin was coo.. closer was a cool current event and lotb, imo.. tic lost me halfway while orc kept the pace, no real misses or eh lines, tic seemed to dial it down, imo..

V - Orc

04-16-2016, 05:56 PM	#10
Saitama One-Punch Man Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 118 Rep Power: 5936477	This fgt loves text vets. Check his style, Fanfare is heavy You Kiss Ass…& biting But was just a reflex from being down there already I liked this angle, could've been worded stronger.. Actin like you brought the NBL back on ya own, you’re wacked as it is Mags remind us of ya verses. Take alllll the credit but don’t write half’a the shit cool personal...maybe not so relevant now, but not bad & Fuck ya nationality. Idc if you Irish, German or attention whore I’ll smash a beer Origin bottle over ya head til you can’t remember yours I dont want to like this, it almost dont work both ways but the origin /irish drinking thing were decent tie ins.. Despised Cashius ever since that S&F loss, leavin ya face smashed And knowing ya moms a Dime just gives you all the more reason to hate Cash You lost me here bro, dime/cash nah Dude loves his broad but I’ll end that puta, fag Stab the bitch…then watch ya 2nd Half Collapse like the Utah Jazz Nice concept. wording/execution was eh I’m tougher than Orc. Cut ya dome off & watch vitals plummet for sport Slice ya abdomen, stuff ya Head inside ‘n watch you Stomach the Thought This was a big miss imo. but it made me laugh, wth lol Whattup Orc Jr? Lemme show you how to do it proper, You'll get Iced in a second. Knifed in the Neck til ya life is bogus & these Blades of Glory will take ya Head Off. we call that the Iron Lotus Not bad. I had an idea like this...ok opener You bit my wholeee steez; now u tryna get them bars off?! Dog if YOU have a Signature Style, you're ending letters with ''Regards, Orc'' Ok personal on em, feels familiar in approach i.e signature Orcs vision is legendary. & u tryna copy this? dude stop... Quit tryna get that Burd's Eye View before you get Dropped from a Rooftop Decent flip of a bird line I've seen & used.. O's cool w/ Sucka, Shazo & Riff. I'm even friendly with Seanzo But you don't fuck with them RM boys cuz they always mention that Longnose Not bad.. seen a few tic/longnose lines - imo Been hearing biter lines alll season. That shit is a waste &&&If this dude calls me a Shark it's ironic with that fucking Fin on his face Homie is next & the masks black, Carbines gripped if it's past rap Orc's the Kobe of text & if them Two .30s Get Shot then this your Last Match Fin was coo.. closer was a cool current event and lotb, imo.. tic lost me halfway while orc kept the pace, no real misses or eh lines, tic seemed to dial it down, imo.. V - Orc