SuckaFreeCashier 0-0 vs Bags 0-0 - bags wins

Joe Boston · 04-13-2016, 08:03 PM

Bags

U gettin bodied it's simple cuz u sloppy an I'm cockin a pistol
Fuck karate an kendo ill give em a hare cut w the shells that's usagi yojimbo
Nice wordplay cool reference

An Yea u said sum shit an we listened...but now u gettin the business
So go head draw the first chopper...I put fire out the stick like a savage way before DaVinci existed
Nice flip good reference on the metaphorical comparison

Fuck ur status on rmbva...all ull hear is toolies that spark an beautiful harps
Soul leave ya body... u comin decorated ya float ....but it ain't no parades this a funeral march
Direct this was tough nice hit

An bitch I'm thoro...show up w a hunnnnid rifles to ur strip or borough
.50 cal turn the wall behind em to a work of art....now ya homies can skip the mural
Liked it but felt the wording on finisher couldve been polished better

An they gassed u when u dropped that vid w them @Credlines buddy
Man wen I watched that monotone BULLSHIT i thought we were trynna win Ben steins money
More of a statement to me here

How long can u live as a mortal? They gon look at ya coffin like...that shit isn't normal
The cashier dont ever handle bags so aisle drop a stack on ya box an them things'll ring it up for u
Little wordy

This guys dyin a buster....dome shot...5 in his spine...leave em lie in a dumpster
Cuz I'm here to pull his cord an then shoot out his back like a sky divin instructor
Dope

SFC

Bags uglier than shit, so he’s resigned to online “who’s a bigger faggot” battles
Cuz when he goes out in public he’s faced with more stares than Ganon’s castle
Corny reference didnt for me

But now you poppin gats and coppin straps? I can’t believe these damn lies
Your best writing is red-lining, something that the streets can’t buy
Nice flip

So if this weak man try, I’ll put metal to his chest like a cardiologist
Just so he can get dusted with the hammer like an archaeologist
Played metaphore

But we on netcees testin emcees so just get me a head ta split
I’m the best seen on the text scene, you gonn get ‘Free? … nah you best a quit
Didnt hit for me

The only time you see bags with a can he’s sippin forties
This bitch is corny, the right fuck a kids head up like rick and morty
Ok nice

Are you kiddin me? Even you finna see the stupidity in my fluidity
The Hammer make him Bleed Out from the Jump, that’s how I do Trinity
I like the direction of this but u butchered the wording

Bags I beat you, n see the results? Now that this killins over
The true emcee, Imma take over u, NC like I’m Villanova
Statement

Bags first 3 bars were nice that 3rd bar was tough. Your closer was pretty dope too. Couple misses but overall u had some decent concepts and good metaphorical comparisons i liked. Sfc
Had the rick n morty line other than that i felt wording hurt some of his concepts like the Trinity reference had potential.

V/Bags felt he took it pretty comfortably little more consistent and better choice of concepts

04-13-2016, 08:03 PM	#12
Joe Boston Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 929 Battle Record: 8-11 Rep Power: 11092531	Bags U gettin bodied it's simple cuz u sloppy an I'm cockin a pistol Fuck karate an kendo ill give em a hare cut w the shells that's usagi yojimbo Nice wordplay cool reference An Yea u said sum shit an we listened...but now u gettin the business So go head draw the first chopper...I put fire out the stick like a savage way before DaVinci existed Nice flip good reference on the metaphorical comparison Fuck ur status on rmbva...all ull hear is toolies that spark an beautiful harps Soul leave ya body... u comin decorated ya float ....but it ain't no parades this a funeral march Direct this was tough nice hit An bitch I'm thoro...show up w a hunnnnid rifles to ur strip or borough .50 cal turn the wall behind em to a work of art....now ya homies can skip the mural Liked it but felt the wording on finisher couldve been polished better An they gassed u when u dropped that vid w them @Credlines buddy Man wen I watched that monotone BULLSHIT i thought we were trynna win Ben steins money More of a statement to me here How long can u live as a mortal? They gon look at ya coffin like...that shit isn't normal The cashier dont ever handle bags so aisle drop a stack on ya box an them things'll ring it up for u Little wordy This guys dyin a buster....dome shot...5 in his spine...leave em lie in a dumpster Cuz I'm here to pull his cord an then shoot out his back like a sky divin instructor Dope SFC Bags uglier than shit, so he’s resigned to online “who’s a bigger faggot” battles Cuz when he goes out in public he’s faced with more stares than Ganon’s castle Corny reference didnt for me But now you poppin gats and coppin straps? I can’t believe these damn lies Your best writing is red-lining, something that the streets can’t buy Nice flip So if this weak man try, I’ll put metal to his chest like a cardiologist Just so he can get dusted with the hammer like an archaeologist Played metaphore But we on netcees testin emcees so just get me a head ta split I’m the best seen on the text scene, you gonn get ‘Free? … nah you best a quit Didnt hit for me The only time you see bags with a can he’s sippin forties This bitch is corny, the right fuck a kids head up like rick and morty Ok nice Are you kiddin me? Even you finna see the stupidity in my fluidity The Hammer make him Bleed Out from the Jump, that’s how I do Trinity I like the direction of this but u butchered the wording Bags I beat you, n see the results? Now that this killins over The true emcee, Imma take over u, NC like I’m Villanova Statement Bags first 3 bars were nice that 3rd bar was tough. Your closer was pretty dope too. Couple misses but overall u had some decent concepts and good metaphorical comparisons i liked. Sfc Had the rick n morty line other than that i felt wording hurt some of his concepts like the Trinity reference had potential. V/Bags felt he took it pretty comfortably little more consistent and better choice of concepts