SuckaFreeCashier 0-0 vs Bags 0-0 - bags wins

[Orc]

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@riffic @SuckaFreeCashier

[Orc]

@SuckaFreeCashier @Bags

[SuckaFreeCashier]

this better, thanks man


im good for whatever you want bags

bout to put bags in a bag like a grocer bars!!!!!

[Ghost1]

Shew man take it easy on me lol


An not too much bro bro

Let's say 12-16

[Ghost1]

I got 12

Watchu wanna do?

I could easily write 4 more
@SuckaFreeCashier

[SuckaFreeCashier]

@Bags whatever you want is cool. i'll match whatever you want.

all bags flips tho

[Ghost1]

Lol that's cool bruh I got 12 cash clips already. They're all new. Uve never seen them.

I'll drop 16 tomorrow afternoon.....so we can try get sum early votes YAHMEAN

[Ghost1]

U gettin bodied it's simple cuz u sloppy an I'm cockin a pistol
Fuck karate an kendo ill give em a hare cut w the shells that's usagi yojimbo
An Yea u said sum shit an we listened...but now u gettin the business
So go head draw the first chopper...I put fire out the stick like a savage way before DaVinci existed
Fuck ur status on rmbva...all ull hear is toolies that spark an beautiful harps
Soul leave ya body... u comin decorated ya float ....but it ain't no parades this a funeral march
An bitch I'm thoro...show up w a hunnnnid rifles to ur strip or borough
.50 cal turn the wall behind em to a work of art....now ya homies can skip the mural
An they gassed u when u dropped that vid w them @Cred lines buddy
Man wen I watched that monotone BULLSHIT i thought we were trynna win Ben steins money
How long can u live as a mortal? They gon look at ya coffin like...that shit isn't normal
The cashier dont ever handle bags so aisle drop a stack on ya box an them things'll ring it up for u
This guys dyin a buster....dome shot...5 in his spine...leave em lie in a dumpster
Cuz I'm here to pull his cord an then shoot out his back like a sky divin instructor

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@SuckaFreeCashier

[SuckaFreeCashier]

Bags uglier than shit, so he’s resigned to online “who’s a bigger faggot” battles
Cuz when he goes out in public he’s faced with more stares than Ganon’s castle
But now you poppin gats and coppin straps? I can’t believe these damn lies
Your best writing is red-lining, something that the streets can’t buy
So if this weak man try, I’ll put metal to his chest like a cardiologist
Just so he can get dusted with the hammer like an archaeologist
But we on netcees testin emcees so just get me a head ta split
I’m the best seen on the text scene, you gonn get ‘Free? … nah you best a quit
The only time you see bags with a can he’s sippin forties
This bitch is corny, the right fuck a kids head up like rick and morty
Are you kiddin me? Even you finna see the stupidity in my fluidity
The Hammer make him Bleed Out from the Jump, that’s how I do Trinity
Bags I beat you, n see the results? Now that this killins over
The true emcee, Imma take over u, NC like I’m Villanova


@Bags

[Joe Boston]

Bags



U gettin bodied it's simple cuz u sloppy an I'm cockin a pistol
Fuck karate an kendo ill give em a hare cut w the shells that's usagi yojimbo
Nice wordplay cool reference

An Yea u said sum shit an we listened...but now u gettin the business
So go head draw the first chopper...I put fire out the stick like a savage way before DaVinci existed
Nice flip good reference on the metaphorical comparison

Fuck ur status on rmbva...all ull hear is toolies that spark an beautiful harps
Soul leave ya body... u comin decorated ya float ....but it ain't no parades this a funeral march
Direct this was tough nice hit

An bitch I'm thoro...show up w a hunnnnid rifles to ur strip or borough
.50 cal turn the wall behind em to a work of art....now ya homies can skip the mural
Liked it but felt the wording on finisher couldve been polished better

An they gassed u when u dropped that vid w them @Credlines buddy
Man wen I watched that monotone BULLSHIT i thought we were trynna win Ben steins money
More of a statement to me here

How long can u live as a mortal? They gon look at ya coffin like...that shit isn't normal
The cashier dont ever handle bags so aisle drop a stack on ya box an them things'll ring it up for u
Little wordy

This guys dyin a buster....dome shot...5 in his spine...leave em lie in a dumpster
Cuz I'm here to pull his cord an then shoot out his back like a sky divin instructor
Dope

SFC






Bags uglier than shit, so he’s resigned to online “who’s a bigger faggot” battles
Cuz when he goes out in public he’s faced with more stares than Ganon’s castle
Corny reference didnt for me

But now you poppin gats and coppin straps? I can’t believe these damn lies
Your best writing is red-lining, something that the streets can’t buy
Nice flip

So if this weak man try, I’ll put metal to his chest like a cardiologist
Just so he can get dusted with the hammer like an archaeologist
Played metaphore

But we on netcees testin emcees so just get me a head ta split
I’m the best seen on the text scene, you gonn get ‘Free? … nah you best a quit
Didnt hit for me

The only time you see bags with a can he’s sippin forties
This bitch is corny, the right fuck a kids head up like rick and morty
Ok nice

Are you kiddin me? Even you finna see the stupidity in my fluidity
The Hammer make him Bleed Out from the Jump, that’s how I do Trinity
I like the direction of this but u butchered the wording

Bags I beat you, n see the results? Now that this killins over
The true emcee, Imma take over u, NC like I’m Villanova
Statement

Bags first 3 bars were nice that 3rd bar was tough. Your closer was pretty dope too. Couple misses but overall u had some decent concepts and good metaphorical comparisons i liked. Sfc
Had the rick n morty line other than that i felt wording hurt some of his concepts like the Trinity reference had potential.

V/Bags felt he took it pretty comfortably little more consistent and better choice of concepts

[Allen Knight]

U gettin bodied it's simple cuz u sloppy an I'm cockin a pistol
Fuck karate an kendo ill give em a hare cut w the shells that's usagi yojimbo
^^^solid opener
An Yea u said sum shit an we listened...but now u gettin the business
So go head draw the first chopper...I put fire out the stick like a savage way before DaVinci existed
^^^nah
Fuck ur status on rmbva...all ull hear is toolies that spark an beautiful harps
Soul leave ya body... u comin decorated ya float ....but it ain't no parades this a funeral march
^^^nice
An bitch I'm thoro...show up w a hunnnnid rifles to ur strip or borough
.50 cal turn the wall behind em to a work of art....now ya homies can skip the mural
^^^fire
An they gassed u when u dropped that vid w them @Cred lines buddy
Man wen I watched that monotone BULLSHIT i thought we were trynna win Ben steins money
^^^nahhh
How long can u live as a mortal? They gon look at ya coffin like...that shit isn't normal
The cashier dont ever handle bags so aisle drop a stack on ya box an them things'll ring it up for u
^^^good
This guys dyin a buster....dome shot...5 in his spine...leave em lie in a dumpster
Cuz I'm here to pull his cord an then shoot out his back like a sky divin instructor
^^^not feeling this closer


Vs

Bags uglier than shit, so he’s resigned to online “who’s a bigger faggot” battles
Cuz when he goes out in public he’s faced with more stares than Ganon’s castle
^^^concepts there but wording wasnt..didnt hit
But now you poppin gats and coppin straps? I can’t believe these damn lies
Your best writing is red-lining, something that the streets can’t buy
^^^nah
So if this weak man try, I’ll put metal to his chest like a cardiologist
Just so he can get dusted with the hammer like an archaeologist
^^^dopeee
But we on netcees testin emcees so just get me a head ta split
I’m the best seen on the text scene, you gonn get ‘Free? … nah you best a quit
^^^nah
The only time you see bags with a can he’s sippin forties
This bitch is corny, the right fuck a kids head up like rick and morty
^^^nicee i like it
Are you kiddin me? Even you finna see the stupidity in my fluidity
The Hammer make him Bleed Out from the Jump, that’s how I do Trinity
^^^ok at best wording hurt this
Bags I beat you, n see the results? Now that this killins over
The true emcee, Imma take over u, NC like I’m Villanova
^^^nah sharp just did this last week


V/bags, i got him taking it he had some nice bars, the skip the mural jawn
was fire an Lotb imo...also liked the funeral march shit.
Cash had acouple nice lines like the dust shit but i felt his wording hurt his other bars..but props to both on the battle.

[SuckaFreeCashier]

Bags closer was mean AF

[Hush]

Originally Posted by Bags

U gettin bodied it's simple cuz u sloppy an I'm cockin a pistol
Fuck karate an kendo ill give em a hare cut w the shells that's usagi yojimbo
fire
An Yea u said sum shit an we listened...but now u gettin the business
So go head draw the first chopper...I put fire out the stick like a savage way before DaVinci existed
nope
Fuck ur status on rmbva...all ull hear is toolies that spark an beautiful harps
Soul leave ya body... u comin decorated ya float ....but it ain't no parades this a funeral march
ok kool
An bitch I'm thoro...show up w a hunnnnid rifles to ur strip or borough
.50 cal turn the wall behind em to a work of art....now ya homies can skip the mural
pretty sure I said this but u good
An they gassed u when u dropped that vid w them @Cred lines buddy
Man wen I watched that monotone BULLSHIT i thought we were trynna win Ben steins money
nah
How long can u live as a mortal? They gon look at ya coffin like...that shit isn't normal
The cashier dont ever handle bags so aisle drop a stack on ya box an them things'll ring it up for u
nah baby boy
This guys dyin a buster....dome shot...5 in his spine...leave em lie in a dumpster
Cuz I'm here to pull his cord an then shoot out his back like a sky divin instructor
fire

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@SuckaFreeCashier

Originally Posted by SuckaFreeCashier

Bags uglier than shit, so he’s resigned to online “who’s a bigger faggot” battles
Cuz when he goes out in public he’s faced with more stares than Ganon’s castle
um dont get it
But now you poppin gats and coppin straps? I can’t believe these damn lies
Your best writing is red-lining, something that the streets can’t buy
um nah
So if this weak man try, I’ll put metal to his chest like a cardiologist
Just so he can get dusted with the hammer like an archaeologist
fire, deja vu I swore i heard or saw this, or maybe its jus cuz its so fire iunno
But we on netcees testin emcees so just get me a head ta split
I’m the best seen on the text scene, you gonn get ‘Free? … nah you best a quit
ehh
The only time you see bags with a can he’s sippin forties
This bitch is corny, the right fuck a kids head up like rick and morty
lol ok
Are you kiddin me? Even you finna see the stupidity in my fluidity
The Hammer make him Bleed Out from the Jump, that’s how I do Trinity
nah bro wtf
Bags I beat you, n see the results? Now that this killins over
The true emcee, Imma take over u, NC like I’m Villanova
eh ok

@Bags

Sucka was off this week man, damn them bars aint hit how I expected
bags wording was diff but he had some ish


v bags

[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Bags

Opener, Mural, Ben Stein's money & cashier.

Decent verse, my time reading your stuff, your reading's longwinded imo, but I like your punch style.

versus

Originally Posted by SuckaFreeCashier

Opener & archaeologist..tbh.

Smh..save for the 2 quotes, I wasn't feeling this verse at all. It's as if u set down to write & almost instantly lost interest..lol.

Overall BAGS took it, fairly easily.

[Saitama]

mural, funeral march, sky diving, usagi was alright too

ganons castle(eh ok) dusted, rick & morty

Bags got it. SuckaFree some your lines left me wanting more, lil the redlining one, she u hit its crisp but can be too basic at times...bags had some long winded stuff ( that cashier line, what? Lol) but had better shit overall..

V bags