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Interesting battle. Liked how Razahs verse came off as an indepth look into Artifices drawn out characters: that emotional aspect Razah brought was missing from Artifices work. Enjoyed Artifices story of the have vs the have nots and the disillusion of grandeur. I remember MagiC distinctively, Welcome back. Ultimately Artifices complexity,vocabulary and arch of his story line won out against the straight edge approach of The Razah
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