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Old 05-11-2013, 09:47 PM   #12
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As a whole piece, I couldnt even begin to understand this lmao. Even the individual lines that I did enjoy, I cant say the enjoyment comes from my understanding, I just enjoy some of the combinations of words you put out there.

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stars, pride, stars, stripes. hashed together. harmonized. new trend.
you lens? lens harder. lens better. lens martyr in blue plastic protector,
the baseball cards we appraised when our pastime became our fetters.
This even made me laugh, although It probably shouldnt have lol. Its just that you lens/lens harder bit got to me for some reason. Anywho, yeah, idk what to think about this. Very cryptic and demanding piece, in the case of the reader anyways.
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