Plot 1-0 vs Adverse 0-0 - ADVERSE WINS

SHECK WES · 04-08-2016, 05:53 PM

Boy you're getting merked, I set it in motion with this verse
And stay 'exposing plot' like a spoiler alert
the concept was good but this was way too short and simple, decent here
You ain't banging shit, everybody knows that you a fake dude
The way 'Ad pop up' in your 'windows' with a 'mac' not even a firewall could save you
lose the quotation things, otherwise this was cool
Swear he models his battle tactics after his girl when they're sexin'
Because she either doesn't show at all or is always asking for an extention
lmaoooooo
You Outback dweling faggot, your girlfriend's on my mattress
And I swear I had that 'Australian Open', yellin till neigbors were complainin' bout the 'racket'
alright not bad, bars are funner when they aren't so obvious tho, hence why I say lose the quotations lol
Your time has come, dudes heckle him on site to get a rise out 'em
But what's most ironic, you went from beefin' with Bags to being put inside of one.
too played man
He went the name change route, trying to disguise this loser, but he botched
So call me Orwell, the way I'm putting 'Dystopian future' in a 'plot'
mmm idk it had potential but execution and wording was off

Vs

You aint ever had quotes fucking liar, I'll slam this faker
Trying to spin us with imaginary lines, whats next? your the damn Equator.
ok had potential for more but just too simple
You just live a shameful existence, so fuck those lies you spittin
Ironic that your names Ad, when your sexlife consists of all + sized women.
multiple things goin on in here but none connected
Fucking that fierce bitch, she's seriously burnt some men
She gave me such an ugly tounge-lashing, I'll never unzip for her again.
wasnt feelin this
Packin angry heat, both gats wanna make you slouch
Scram when these grumpy beasts pop outta the can, that's Oscar the Grouch.
this could have been dope if done a lil differently
Pouncin on this faggot old skool, he don't wanna see these bars
Coz I'm taking Ad outta the show like pausing the TV while recording VCRS.
nah
You don't know me kid, fuck your research just talking rubbish
Verse verse so full of misconceptions it more resembles an abortion bucket.
ehh

This was kinda one sided to me, I thought plot was a topical guy but he had some concepts just needed to execute them harsher or what not. Ad had some good sht just needs to drop the ''''''' stuff

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04-08-2016, 05:53 PM	#10
SHECK WES Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 690 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 4173632	Boy you're getting merked, I set it in motion with this verse And stay 'exposing plot' like a spoiler alert the concept was good but this was way too short and simple, decent here You ain't banging shit, everybody knows that you a fake dude The way 'Ad pop up' in your 'windows' with a 'mac' not even a firewall could save you lose the quotation things, otherwise this was cool Swear he models his battle tactics after his girl when they're sexin' Because she either doesn't show at all or is always asking for an extention lmaoooooo You Outback dweling faggot, your girlfriend's on my mattress And I swear I had that 'Australian Open', yellin till neigbors were complainin' bout the 'racket' alright not bad, bars are funner when they aren't so obvious tho, hence why I say lose the quotations lol Your time has come, dudes heckle him on site to get a rise out 'em But what's most ironic, you went from beefin' with Bags to being put inside of one. too played man He went the name change route, trying to disguise this loser, but he botched So call me Orwell, the way I'm putting 'Dystopian future' in a 'plot' mmm idk it had potential but execution and wording was off Vs You aint ever had quotes fucking liar, I'll slam this faker Trying to spin us with imaginary lines, whats next? your the damn Equator. ok had potential for more but just too simple You just live a shameful existence, so fuck those lies you spittin Ironic that your names Ad, when your sexlife consists of all + sized women. multiple things goin on in here but none connected Fucking that fierce bitch, she's seriously burnt some men She gave me such an ugly tounge-lashing, I'll never unzip for her again. wasnt feelin this Packin angry heat, both gats wanna make you slouch Scram when these grumpy beasts pop outta the can, that's Oscar the Grouch. this could have been dope if done a lil differently Pouncin on this faggot old skool, he don't wanna see these bars Coz I'm taking Ad outta the show like pausing the TV while recording VCRS. nah You don't know me kid, fuck your research just talking rubbish Verse verse so full of misconceptions it more resembles an abortion bucket. ehh This was kinda one sided to me, I thought plot was a topical guy but he had some concepts just needed to execute them harsher or what not. Ad had some good sht just needs to drop the ''''''' stuff Vote Ad